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~sugarpie313~ Member
since 2000-09-14
Posts 375Maine, USA |
Roses are red Violets are blue I made a wish And you came true *...Remember your roots, my friend they're right down below, because heroes come and heroes go...* - Creed |
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HiddenSparklez Member
since 2000-12-29
Posts 190British Columbia, Canada |
Short and sweet.  "You do what you do, you say what you say, you try to be everything to everyone... come on now, do that stupid dance for me" -Everclear |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
*writes what popped into his head while he was reading whatever it was you wrote* Damn I gotta turn this chair all the way around and grab the strawberry.....and if I do that I'm wasting energy......damn I weigh 105lbs now........I lost 10lbs within 2months for no apparently reason. What's if it's all this swinging I do on this chair? Would taking the strawberry kill me eventually?............to swing or not to swing.... nice poem  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I'm in love with my shadow I admire it daily |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
short and sweet Dopes...huh? I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
I like it, I thought of wishes that a lot of people make like this. *Yells* Mommy!! Dopey's scaring me  "Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Lakewalker http://www.thehungersite.com |
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