Teen Poetry #4 |
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Andrea4writes Junior Member
since 2000-12-03
Posts 31Fayetteville, NC USA |
Love This unending joy I feel I hope this is for real, The constant smile on my face I'm floating high in space. The nervous butterflies to look into your eyes, The closeness I miss from your warm gentle kiss. The unending fear, all the pain and tears, A broken heart from growing apart. A long summer walk, a midnight talk, A hug, a kiss, oh these I have missed. Now together, always and forever. This must be what love is. _____________________________________ Hey you guys i dont know if you remember me but im back... lol well i got some really good knews im getting married it will be in june on the 9th... talk to you guys latter..... <3Andrea ~luvs~ Anthony,<3 You only live once so live it to the fullest.. Love comes and goes but friends stay for ever~!~!~!~!~! |
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Neokrew Member
since 2000-12-24
Posts 60VA |
Hey, Congratulations !!!!!! and the poem really touched me because I could relate. Keep on posting I think I will enjoy your work. --Neo |
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Ski*Chick Member
since 2001-01-13
Posts 141Fitchburg, Mass, Usa |
I liked the poem, hope you and your husband have a great time together! Bye Sk*Chick! |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
Congratulations I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR |
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Allan Riverwood
since 2001-01-04
Posts 3502Winnipeg |
Love the poem. Had a great flow to it, I breezed through it but digested every part. Well done. And congratulations! -Allan We used to hate people, now we just make fun of them. It's more effective that way. --KMFDM |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Nice one here and congrats! Wonderful news! I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I'm in love with my shadow I admire it daily |
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xShUgArHiGhx
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
These sound like wonderful feelings...you should feel very lucky to have all that you have with this person! Great poem and im glad that everything is so wonderful for you! |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
Nice job on this and congratulations! "Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Lakewalker http://www.thehungersite.com |
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