Teen Poetry #4 |
I don't know |
Allysa
since 1999-11-09
Posts 1952In an upside-down garden |
I don't know why I care anymore, I don't know how I can. I don't know why I love you anymore, I don't know who I am. I don't know what's happening anymore, I don't know why I care. I don't know what I'm thinking anymore, I don't know how long I'll be there. I don't know what to do anymore, I don't know why I try. I don't know if you love me anymore, I don't know if I'll cry. I don't know if I'll hurt anymore, I don't know if I need you. I don't know if I'll try anymore, I don't know what to do. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ just a little something of a stupid poem I wrote. Hope ya all like it. Guys are like stars. There are millions of them, but only one will make your dreams come true. |
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Allan Riverwood
since 2001-01-04
Posts 3502Winnipeg |
Oh, yeah. It's cute. Seems like you have a lot of questions. There were a few that I could relate to myself. Keep up the good work. Good luck finding answers. -Allan We used to hate people, now we just make fun of them. It's more effective that way. --KMFDM |
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Allysa
since 1999-11-09
Posts 1952In an upside-down garden |
Thanks Allan, for reading this. I'm bored. I'm at school, and I'm bored, but anyways, thanks much!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! C-ya areound Guys are like stars. There are millions of them, but only one will make your dreams come true. |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
hmmmmm......different i like the way you penned it though all these unknowns in your life i guess we all go thru that don't it drive us crazy keep sharing asylla by the way, is this about nitsuj I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR |
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xShUgArHiGhx
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
I liked this poem and i can relate to it all too well. So many questions but i cant seem to find the answers either. I hope you find them out soon... |
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Jenn Cirrincione
since 2000-07-02
Posts 2107Fl |
I do know some of these feelings all too well. Sorry you're questioning so much... however it leads to important answers, usually. xoxo Jenn "I'm a big, big, girl, in a big, big world, it's not a big, big thing if you leave me, but I do feel, that I will miss you much..." Emilia |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
We all go through the "I don't know's".....but hey......most often than not we get through them....... -You say i'm tragic I say it's magic kid. You say i'm lucky We all know it's in the cards.- Smashing Pumpkins I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I'm in love with my shadow I admire it daily |
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Allysa
since 1999-11-09
Posts 1952In an upside-down garden |
Thanks much everyone!!!!!!!! Dopey you are awesome!!!!!!!! I love the thing about the shadow!!!!!!!!!! Guys are like stars. There are millions of them, but only one will make your dreams come true. |
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