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Allysa 
since 1999-11-09
Posts 1952In an upside-down garden 
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All these days, all I've wanted, was just to be nearer, to you. All this time, all I wanted, was something, to do. All the wrong, be corrected, all the right, be forewarned. All the strife, be disected, all the pain, be long gone. All these days, all I've wanted, was to talk, to you. All through this, that's all that, I've wanted, to do. ----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Just a little something. Ps. Anyone got any ideas for a good quote for my signature???? Guys are like stars. There are millions of them, but only one will make your dreams come true. |
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DragonFang Senior Member
since 2000-03-09
Posts 522Missouri, USA |
Very nice poem. As far as a quote... *shrugs* no clue, sorry ~_~ "Sa souvraya niende missian ye." \ I am lost in my own mind. |
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Jenabou Member
since 2000-06-13
Posts 215Oklahoma/Nova Scotia Canada/USA |
i really love this poem!!!! its right to the point keep writing and what kinda quoe do you want? i know lots of them just give me a topic and ill tell ya what ive got The world is like a mirror; frown at it, and it frowns at you. Smile and it smiles, too Be kind,for everyone you meet is fighting a harder battle |
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Allan Riverwood
since 2001-01-04
Posts 3502Winnipeg |
Nice poem. Brought a smile to my face. As for a quote, try looking back at some of your most insightful work, and picking a phrase that has signifigance. Or do what I did, take a line from a song you like and make a statement about your musical taste. ^_^ -Allan We used to hate people, now we just make fun of them. It's more effective that way. --KMFDM |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
Don't we all just want our lives to be the way we want them to be? Unfortunately, it isn't, and we have to grow thru it. hmmm....what's a good quote for your signature? let me see what about though? I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR |
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Jenn Cirrincione
since 2000-07-02
Posts 2107Fl |
Not bad at all! I liked this. As for your quote... I'd definitly suggest checking music you like for insightful quotations. xoxo Jenn "I'm a big, big, girl, in a big, big world, it's not a big, big thing if you leave me, but I do feel, that I will miss you much..." Emilia |
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fractal007 Senior Member
since 2000-06-01
Posts 1958 |
Nice poem here. As for a signature quote, I don't know. Maybe something from the renaissance period's love poems. For example, perhaps something humourous like a quote from "Why So Pale and Wan?". |
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katherine Member
since 2000-06-10
Posts 365Canberra Australia |
great poem!!! i loved it ~katherine~ |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Quotes: My butt hurts, can you rub it? LOOK OUT! If all fails, classics prevail. Live life, don't let life live you Yo mamma! Tis nothing but a Tis, and a Tis we are not! Never turn your back on time Life is like a big, fat, bald gladiator named Pepe......always cussing in Spanish and trying to knock you down even when you've hit rock bottom. OK yea that's it.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I'm in love with my shadow I admire it daily |
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Allysa
since 1999-11-09
Posts 1952In an upside-down garden |
THanks ya all! Dopey< You crack me up sooooooo bad!!!!! Got anymore???????? For now my signature is whatever it is, I don't remember. It used to be a quote from a Dido song, but I don't know what it is now, and I have to figure it out. Guys are like stars. There are millions of them, but only one will make your dreams come true. |
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