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Hardkore
Junior Member

since 2001-01-31

Posts 33
San DIego, California

0 posted 2001-01-31 01:01 AM

Passion fuels my love
Passion becomes consumed by love
Without my love I become passionless
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Glimpses of a future
Whose chances are almost never
Emotions never know nor shared
Only left with the chance
To fuel her passions towards others
Tormented to watch in the corner
Loving her may bring me to lose my heart
For it can't handle the loneliness much longer
Delisions of her felling the same
Curses me to hope and dream

I just want to wrap my arms around you
And escape to a better place
Lost in the love which is you
Show me the way
And together we will rise
Above the rubble of the past

Allan Riverwood

Member Elite

since 2001-01-04

Posts 3502
Winnipeg

1 posted 2001-01-31 03:45 AM

This is.... very beautiful. Touching, for my own reasons.
Very emotional and excellently expressive.
Welcome to Passions. You are going to LOVE it here.
-Allan

Would you really want everything that you thrive for, if you could never appreciate it?

Stephanya
Member

since 2000-11-03

Posts 63
Berkshire County~USA~

2 posted 2001-01-31 04:51 AM

Awesome! Honestly

Comepletyly moving... PLEASE keep up the good work

(:*stephani*:)A true friend will always stay a friend whether or not you feel as though the friendship or relationship is about to end*

Kit McCallum

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Member Laureate

since 2000-04-30

Posts 14774
Ontario, Canada

3 posted 2001-01-31 07:23 AM

Welcome to Passions Hardkore!

We are very happy you have decided to join our community of poetry friendship. We look forward to having you share your efforts with us!

This was an excellent first post ... wonderful wording and a nice depth to the thoughts, well done! I hope to read more of your poetry and your responses to our wonderful family of poets! (check your e-mail for a special message)

Best wishes,
/Kit

Ina
Senior Member

since 2000-10-09

Posts 1236
Quebec, Canada

4 posted 2001-01-31 09:43 AM

welcome to passions!
you will love it here, as Allan says.
amazing firs post. so much emotion! i surely hope to see more.
regina

sin from my lips? O tresspass sweetly urged!give me my sin again!
W. Skakespeare

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

5 posted 2001-01-31 01:04 PM

Welcome to Passions!

this was a wonderful post! Very great read and i hope to see you post more in the near future!

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

Jenn Cirrincione

Member Elite

since 2000-07-02

Posts 2107
Fl

6 posted 2001-01-31 02:44 PM

This was really pretty! Welcome to our poetry home...!!

Keep posting.

xoxo
Jenn

"A person can never get over a broken heart if they aren't willing to let go of all of the pieces."-- ??

Angel Bee
Member

since 2001-01-30

Posts 176
Virginia

7 posted 2001-01-31 03:36 PM

Nice poem, it was good. Keep writing

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Hallie_Angel
Member

since 2000-12-06

Posts 102

8 posted 2001-01-31 03:57 PM

Welcome!!! Good poem, it showed a lot of heart. Keep up the good work!

~Catherine

jeremydraul
Senior Member

since 2000-08-01

Posts 1118
State of Despair

9 posted 2001-01-31 10:20 PM

this was filled with sincerity
great job on the first post
we all need the fuel to survive
welcome!

-JDR

Acies

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Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-07

Posts 7665
Twilight Zone

10 posted 2001-02-01 02:54 PM

WELCOME TO PASSIONS!!!

It's nice to see that you've decided to join our family here in Passions in Poetry. I hope you would feel as welcome as everyone else has. Everyone in here are amazing people and we all are here to help each other grow as writers and more importantly to grow as better individuals. Enjoy your stay

I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR

[This message has been edited by acire (edited 02-01-2001).]

Acies

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Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-07

Posts 7665
Twilight Zone

11 posted 2001-02-01 02:54 PM

sorry for the double post

[This message has been edited by acire (edited 02-01-2001).]

luvnkris
Member

since 2000-08-31

Posts 144
Perth, Australia

12 posted 2001-02-01 09:33 PM

that was beautiful! so moving! i loved it!
great first post!
Luv Jo
xoxo

* never live a second without being grateful for all you have around you*

TrueLUV
Member

since 2000-07-19

Posts 158
Connecticut, U.S.A.

13 posted 2001-02-02 01:26 AM

Welcome to PASSIONS the piece was beautiful I can't wait to read more I got in touch with the poem it relates to me in some way

katherine
Member

since 2000-06-10

Posts 365
Canberra Australia

14 posted 2001-02-03 01:14 AM

It's awesome i LOVE it!
so sweet

~katherine~

the day i tried to live
Junior Member

since 2001-02-03

Posts 27
the seventh circle

15 posted 2001-02-03 02:00 AM

love the final two lines... rubble is an excellent word to describe love (and no i'm not being facetious)... frustration in the form of art begets inspiration and enlightenment... also touches a fairly common sentiment amongst teens these days and is obviously heart-felt... bravo

Angel in Flight
Member

since 2001-01-07

Posts 381

16 posted 2001-02-03 11:30 AM

Wonderful poem!!! Very moving and expressive poem you have here. Keep posting, And welcome to passions!!! I know you will love it here, and we are truly "friends within a family" and i am very happy you decided to join our family here. WElCOME once again and hope to see you soon.

~"Amanda"~

What comes with love are tears of pain. What comes with hate are brighter days~ Amanda

xShUgArHiGhx

Member Elite

since 2000-09-26

Posts 3150
tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs

17 posted 2001-02-04 12:32 PM

Welcome to Passions!!! You poured a lot of emotion into this piece...very well written!!! Great piece and i cant wait to see more from you!! Welcome again!

Erin
Member Elite

since 2000-06-15

Posts 2527
~Chicago~

18 posted 2001-02-05 01:57 AM

Hardkore~You wrote a great poem here. You've done a good job of getting your feelings out. Keep it up!!!

People leave our lives as quickly as they come, but the ones that mean something leave footprints in our hearts.

Tamma

Senior Member

since 2000-01-17

Posts 794
In His Arms, Harpers Ferry, WV

19 posted 2001-02-05 10:53 AM

First of all, I haven't welcomed you yet, so WELCOM TO PASSIONS!!!

Second of all, you are obviously in the right place for "Passion" lovely work...Lovely sentiment

~*~ Tamma Loves Justin ~*~

www.angelfire.com/wv2/poetrycorner
I'm just a girl looking at a guy asking him to love me

Pixie-Babe03
Member

since 2000-08-29

Posts 387
Central Maine

20 posted 2001-02-05 02:34 PM

Welcome to Passions, this is a beautiful first post!

hope to see many more!
~*Pixie*~

-=Love starts with a SMILE, grows with a KISS, and ends with a TEAR=-

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