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Mirror Shade "Rengay # 2" by Allan And Angel in Flight
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Mirror Shade "Rengay # 2" by Allan And Angel in Flight |
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Angel in Flight Member
since 2001-01-07
Posts 381 |
a mask covers all, do we wish to see within, look beneath the skin there are certain things that dwell not on the surface rather, in the veins shatter through the glass, onto the contrasting side. thus,you’ll see anew but is this correct? is the glass not transparent? can we not see through? a mirror of glass, one may view out, yet not in join me, and behold i grow weary of this guise if you would, lend me your eyes by~ Allan Riverwood And Angel in Flight [This message has been edited by Angel in Flight (edited 02-01-2001).] |
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jeremydraul Senior Member
since 2000-08-01
Posts 1118State of Despair |
that was absolutely 100% kick A$$! you two are definately a wonderful collaberation keep up the new style, i love it bravo!!! -JDR [This message has been edited by jeremydraul (edited 02-01-2001).] |
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Allan Riverwood
since 2001-01-04
Posts 3502Winnipeg |
Yeah, i like "Mirror Shade" better than the last one, personally. We're definitely keeping up with this style! -Allan We used to hate people, now we just make fun of them. It's more effective that way. --KMFDM [This message has been edited by Allan Riverwood (edited 02-02-2001).] |
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fractal007 Senior Member
since 2000-06-01
Posts 1958 |
Impressive colaboration. You two should work together more often! |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
i hope to see others do this too this is perfect "feel and not see, for your heart sees one's true self better than your eyes" great job Allan and Amanda I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR |
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Ina Senior Member
since 2000-10-09
Posts 1236Quebec, Canada |
Im so happy!!!! You two write beautifully together. I really hope all is well now. talk to you both later Regina when i wish for you, i wish that could we lie side by side hearts entwined. |
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Tamma
since 2000-01-17
Posts 794In His Arms, Harpers Ferry, WV |
ok...I'm starting to think that my fellow poets here are trying to tell me something. First I see a post with "Justin" in the title, and now its "Shade" I'm gonna flip if I see the name "Michael" in the title of a poem.  Tamma Marian Offenstein Loves Justin Michael Shade www.angelfire.com/wv2/poetrycorner I'm just a girl looking at a guy asking him to love me |
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Tamma
since 2000-01-17
Posts 794In His Arms, Harpers Ferry, WV |
ok...i read it(finally) but i dont get it...oh well...im going back to bed... www.angelfire.com/wv2/poetrycorner I'm just a girl looking at a guy asking him to love me |
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Angel in Flight Member
since 2001-01-07
Posts 381 |
lol @ Jeremy. Thanks for what you said it really brightened my day. fractual~ yes, I believe we will be working together more often. Acrie~ Yes, I think everyone at passions should try this with another member here. It will bring us all ALOT closer together, and these are very fun to do. Ina~ *smiling Thank you. And yes, things are a bit better now. Tamma~ lol... And about you not understanding it, I believe this rengay is traslated differently by every person. You just have to figure out what it means to you, if anything at all. Thank You all for your replies!!! Sincerely ~"Amanda"~ What comes with love are tears of pain. What comes with hate are brighter days~ Amanda |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
This was simply wonderful. You two do write together. I liked it a lot.......I might do this one day........naaaaa haha...I don't like team writing. I'm a solo artist.....oh well. Nice one here guys.........another poem to admire.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I'm in love with my shadow I admire it daily |
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the day i tried to live Junior Member
since 2001-02-03
Posts 27the seventh circle |
we are the merry-makers and we are the dreamers of dreams hmmm... i have to admit, i liked this piece... the back-and-forth contrast between (what i only assume) was the two poets was innovative and rather intriguing... i like it... now i just have to find a friend who can write *heh*... oh wait, i have no friends... forget that then... i'll just stick to melancholia |
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Miracle Junior Member
since 2001-01-07
Posts 22 |
WOW!!! The imagry of this and the meaning is so powerful i can hardly breath. How did you two do this? This has to be one of the best poem/rengay i have ever read in my life. You two should keep at this! I cant wait to see more from the both of you. |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
Very nicely done you two, I love when people can work together and come up with great stuff. Keep them coming, please! "Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Lakewalker http://www.thehungersite.com |
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anonymousfemale Member Elite
since 2000-02-02
Posts 2797Limbo |
You two come up with the most creative pieces when you write together. I prefer this one to the other one that you wrote. ~AF~ "Do not dwell in the past, do not dream of the future, concentrate the mind on the present moment." Buddha |
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Angel in Flight Member
since 2001-01-07
Posts 381 |
Adding to library, and lake thanks for the smile. And elizabeth, I like this one much better also. thank you both for your replies. |
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Isabel Galaxia Senior Member
since 2000-06-18
Posts 733 |
This is great...I'm impressed  I like these new smilies lol! Bel |
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TrueLUV Member
since 2000-07-19
Posts 158Connecticut, U.S.A. |
I loved how you decribed how we all wear masks how we sometimes put on a smile just to hide ourselves and just to let you know thanks for you reply on dos chicas..tres chicas but for a future reference iam a guy |
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