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butterflies come in blue boxes
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StarPryncess17 Senior Member
since 2000-05-31
Posts 932Colorado |
butterflies come in blue boxes my love for you in red i'm happier than ever i've been so since we met you are the best thing in my life everything that we've done you mean the world to me and more I know today, and forever you are 'the one' "Tell me why you cry" |
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Allan Riverwood
since 2001-01-04
Posts 3502Winnipeg |
Very pretty. Loved every moment of it. You started it out strong. "Butterflies come in Blue Boxes." That line makes you really think... even now I'm unsure about its meaning. Well done. -Allan Would you really want everything that you thrive for, if you could never appreciate it? |
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anomaly187 Member
since 2000-06-15
Posts 284San Francisco,CA,US |
hey this is really great.. i like short poems.. they can hold great talent./. amazing work! "When the going gets weird, the weird turn pro" |
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DancinQueen
since 2000-07-29
Posts 1092Kokomo,IN,USA |
aww i especially loved the title. that was so cute and delicate. im literally in love with you title lol but the poem rocked! as usual, talk to you soon! hopefully for more then 10seconds next time tho lol bye babe* dq ¤Sometimes the hardest thing to get over, is something you never really had¤ |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Very well done here. I liked the whole butterflies in blue and your love in red......do the butterflies symbolize any sort of emotion or meaning?  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I'm in love with my shadow I admire it daily |
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jeremydraul Senior Member
since 2000-08-01
Posts 1118State of Despair |
very nice words expressed very nicely in this form your very sincere in your writing thanks for the post -JDR |
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fractal007 Senior Member
since 2000-06-01
Posts 1958 |
I am glad that you've found the "one". I hope that you have a happy life together. Good poem. Keep up the good work. |
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
love the title a lot one of your best poems -- at least i think glad that you're happy Jess you deserve to be for you are a darling hope things stay this way for you talk to you soon I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
Cool poem, on a literal level I'd guess the butterflies are some gift that you recieved, in a blue box??? I love the poem because it's written very well  "Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Lakewalker http://www.thehungersite.com |
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Ski*Chick Member
since 2001-01-13
Posts 141Fitchburg, Mass, Usa |
Hey I like your poem.. The title is cute too. Bye ~*~Minna~*~   |
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Isabel Galaxia Senior Member
since 2000-06-18
Posts 733 |
Hey there. This is great....like all of them. Congrats. Keep it up? Bel |
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~sugarpie313~ Member
since 2000-09-14
Posts 375Maine, USA |
This poem is wonderful!! i love the butterflies in blue box, my love for you in red. I LOVE IT!!!!! keep it up ~Valerie~ *...Remember your roots, my friend they're right down below, because heroes come and heroes go...* - Creed |
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Suga_Baby Member
since 2000-08-06
Posts 380Maine, USA |
Oooooh this is so cute! Very nicely done  -=Suga=- |
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