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memories of you....... |
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~unwanted~ New Member
since 2000-11-23
Posts 7²h꣣ |
In a locked room I keep my memories Memories of you A box of pictures Of you Of me Me and you together Small cards Saying the sweetest words That made me smile Touched my heart Forever And I love you Stars I remember being in your arms Looking in your eyes Never once wanting to look away Under the stars we laid Dreaming sweet dreams Of me and you Together forever Some dreams come true And others I guess... Are meant to stay dreams Love I try Not to think of how you made me feel I don't want to remember that I still love you I don't want to see that I care I don't want to look at the blue roses You never forgot They were my favorite Wilting in my room From you A small card saying, "I love you" Hate I want to hate you For leaving me Leaving me here all alone Hate you for loving her For not loving me Resent I resent each time you hold her Hold her like you held me Resent each kiss you place on her lips Kiss her like you kissed me Jealousy Jealous of her Of each, "I love you" You whisper sweetly in her ear The red roses You lay in her hands And not mine Missing I miss you Miss the smile you kept on my face Miss the way you kissed me Miss your soft colored eyes Miss the way you loved me The way you made me feel I miss you so much So much more then you know The more I remember I wish I could forget Forget all these memories Memories that stay haunting me Through each sleepless night Each endless night Without you £ove is blind.. And it will take over you mind... What you think is love is truley not... You need to elevate and find.~Eve~ |
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jeremydraul Senior Member
since 2000-08-01
Posts 1118State of Despair |
this was very sad i hope things work out for you i really liked: "The red roses You lay in her hands And not mine" good job -JDR |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
I read this one......check out my reply in the other one. I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I'm in love with my shadow I admire it daily |
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Jenn Cirrincione
since 2000-07-02
Posts 2107Fl |
Cool. I DEFINITLY know this feeling. Jealousy sucks... and it's so hard to get over.  xoxo Jenn "I'm a big, big, girl, in a big, big world, it's not a big, big thing if you leave me, but I do feel, that I will miss you much..." Emilia |
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MidnightMaverick Junior Member
since 2001-01-15
Posts 35Duluth, MN, USA |
It's another good piece. You're an excellent writer. Does this person deserve you to be jealous of him and his new interest if he hurt you that bad? Is it worth it after everything? I still think it's a good piece. Keep on writing. -Maverick |
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sweetypie5 Member
since 2000-10-06
Posts 97MWC,OK,USA |
Wowzers..that was really really good! I wish i could write like that!!! I'll be looking for more of ur poems! ~LOVE~ *~*S*T*E*P*H*A*N*I*E*~* *~*Hope is a walking dream*~* *~*Don't take life too seriosly~~~you'll never get out alive*~* |
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DancinQueen
since 2000-07-29
Posts 1092Kokomo,IN,USA |
Hey~ I really liked this. Sad..but so much emotion. Just keep writing and you'll be alright *dq ¤Sometimes the hardest thing to get over, is something you never really had¤ |
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luvnkris Member
since 2000-08-31
Posts 144Perth, Australia |
Hey, this was a great poem - i really enjoyed it! i'm sorry things didn't work out with the guy, it must be horrible to watch him with someone else! anyways, i'm sure you'll find another person that you will love more than the last! Luv Jo xoxo * never live a second without being grateful for all you have around you* |
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