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Will you marry me?
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Will you marry me? |
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Ina Senior Member
since 2000-10-09
Posts 1236Quebec, Canada 
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in the silence that stretches over the phone, you ask so many questions, wanting answers but i dont know what to say The night is young, you say in that voice that is a balm over my twisted pain you talk of love and happiness when you know i do not know what happiness is unless im with you do you want me there with you? i want you here with me but i can't say it Then you ask the most lovely question that proves you love me more than i will ever to love you "will you marry me?i will love you forever and nobody will ever hurt you" o god, what shall i do, the vow of love you want from me would be even better, if i were not so young You await an answer, but you already know that i must refuse, for i want to love you and cherish you now, but i shall wait until we are both older and wiser and even deeper in love. I do not hurt you, but tell you gently the answer you already know i will love you for longer than forever, you breath in a whisper and you sing me a little lullabye that has become your only way to help in easing my pain. Regina when i wish for you, i wish that that we lie side my side hearts entwined. |
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~sugarpie313~ Member
since 2000-09-14
Posts 375Maine, USA |
This is a very nicely written poem. It is not a good idea to marry young. Give yourself a chance to live life before you settle down and take away that chance from yourself. Wise choice  keep writin. i love it!~Valerie~ *...Remember your roots, my friend they're right down below, because heroes come and heroes go...* - Creed |
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Allan Riverwood
since 2001-01-04
Posts 3502Winnipeg |
Hmm... Yes, wait until you are both older, but still make sure he knows you aren't just holding out because you have doubts. Lovely poem, nonetheless. Take it as the greatest compliment imaginable, even if you had to say no. -Allan Would you really want everything that you thrive for, if you could never appreciate it? |
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jeremydraul Senior Member
since 2000-08-01
Posts 1118State of Despair |
very serious subject i loved the conversational event it really transpired a scene in my head good job -JDR |
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Ina Senior Member
since 2000-10-09
Posts 1236Quebec, Canada |
Thank you for replying. We both want to get married, but its not a possiblity since we are so young. Regina when i wish for you, i wish that could we lie side by side hearts entwined. |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Regi, nice one here. You already know what i think about this whole thing. Be wise... I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I'm in love with my shadow I admire it daily |
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Jenn Cirrincione
since 2000-07-02
Posts 2107Fl |
Marriage is a huge commitment. Glad you're waiting. This is a good piece. xoxo Jenn "I'm a big, big, girl, in a big, big world, it's not a big, big thing if you leave me, but I do feel, that I will miss you much..." Emilia |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
i noticed a little suspense in there yes marriage shouldn't be taken lightly even older people make the mistake of jumping in too fast you did the right thing....hope he understands I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR |
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luvnkris Member
since 2000-08-31
Posts 144Perth, Australia |
Hi, tough situation you were in! me and my boyfriend want to get married too, but we are too young! (i'm still in school) but we're in love and always will be, so, as soon as i finish school and we have some money we're definatly getting married! anyways good luck, hope you do end up getting married when your older! Luv Jo xoxo * never live a second without being grateful for all you have around you* |
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