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Tamma
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0 posted 2001-02-04 02:32 PM


One of these days they’ll see
How much it’s hurting me.

The words they say,
Dig deep into my soul.

I know they don’t care,
But must they show it?

I’ve made mistakes,
I’ll admit to that.

But falling in love,
Was not a mistake.

I love Justin,
I can’t help that.

He’s MY redneck,
And I love it.



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1 posted 2001-02-04 03:06 PM


alright... i'm afraid you lost me here... apparently someone has been teasing you about having an interest in a "redneck" and this bothers you, but i'm not sure i'm clear on what's going on...
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2 posted 2001-02-04 03:07 PM


Aww... how sweet.  ^_^
And nice grad pic.  
Keep up the great work, Tamma.  
-Allan


We used to hate people, now we just make fun of them. It's more effective that way. --KMFDM

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3 posted 2001-02-04 07:11 PM


lol Tamma.  I guess you were gonna share it    simple and straight to the point.  good poem.  thanks for sharing

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4 posted 2001-02-04 08:31 PM


Tamma, Great poem!! And no matter what dont let anyone or anything take you away from what your heart desires, because in the end if you let them tear you away you can never come back to how it once was. To love is not a mistake, but to let someone take you way from that love is. I know you are going to stay with Justin, but i am just saying dont let them take you away from him or anything no matter what. Ok i am done now. Thanks for sharing the poem it was wonderful.

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5 posted 2001-02-04 09:04 PM


There's NOTHING wrong with rednecks, and I'll beat anyone who says that there is! (Offendin' my kinfolk! Sheesh!)

Seriously, great expressions here, Tamma. Great new pic, too! Thanks for posting!



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6 posted 2001-02-04 09:14 PM


Kinsfolk?.....uhhhh.......rrrrrright.


Nice one here tamma......he IS your redneck!



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7 posted 2001-02-04 09:20 PM


Oops, I posted with my other name! Damn, this is jeremydraul   I chuckled at the title. I apologize for that! I thought it was humorous to refer to him as your redneck..lol. It must really suck to be in this predicament. I hope they finally realize how nice of a person you are. Take care....

Jeremy

"zzzIzzzAMzzzJEREMYDRAULzzz"



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8 posted 2001-02-04 09:27 PM


Appearances mean little in the long run. All that matters is you are happy. And you seem to be, so good luck! And ignore the people who are ignorant.
xoxo
Jenn


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9 posted 2001-02-04 11:23 PM


Tamma, you should seriously not give a rats about what other people think about Justin. You are crazy for him (if they can't see that they must be blind), so screw what others think ok.  

*note to self: Do not offend Lovebug and her kinsfolk* lol

~AF~



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10 posted 2001-02-05 07:43 AM


Hehe LoveBug...I'm Just as much of a Redneck as any of 'em...cause as they say "There's a little Redneck in all of us" Sometimes I dress the part, Sometimes I dont. Oh well, even some of the Redneck around Jefferson call me a Redneck girl. Hehehehe...Some of them, ya just gotta love....like Justin and John Deere  



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[This message has been edited by Tamma (edited 02-05-2001).]

Ina
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11 posted 2001-02-05 12:34 PM


Where exactly does one have to be from to be a redneck?jk.
very simple and straight forward poem Tamma. good job.
Regina


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12 posted 2001-02-05 03:27 PM


Tamma, our Justin's are starting to sound quite alike! My Justin is a redneck too. There IS a little redneck in all of us, it just takes another redneck to bring it out!!! My dad makes fun of the way he talks, and how since I talk to him and he has an interesting vocabulary, I use some of his words. Anyways, you love that redneck and that's all that matters/       (Rednecks are very loveable!)

Guys are like stars. There are millions of them, but only one will make your dreams come true.


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