Teen Poetry #4 |
He's MY Redneck |
Tamma
since 2000-01-17
Posts 794In His Arms, Harpers Ferry, WV |
One of these days they’ll see How much it’s hurting me. The words they say, Dig deep into my soul. I know they don’t care, But must they show it? I’ve made mistakes, I’ll admit to that. But falling in love, Was not a mistake. I love Justin, I can’t help that. He’s MY redneck, And I love it. www.angelfire.com/wv2/poetrycorner I'm just a girl looking at a guy asking him to love me |
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the day i tried to live Junior Member
since 2001-02-03
Posts 27the seventh circle |
alright... i'm afraid you lost me here... apparently someone has been teasing you about having an interest in a "redneck" and this bothers you, but i'm not sure i'm clear on what's going on... |
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Allan Riverwood
since 2001-01-04
Posts 3502Winnipeg |
Aww... how sweet. ^_^ And nice grad pic. Keep up the great work, Tamma. -Allan We used to hate people, now we just make fun of them. It's more effective that way. --KMFDM |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
lol Tamma. I guess you were gonna share it simple and straight to the point. good poem. thanks for sharing I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR |
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Angel in Flight Member
since 2001-01-07
Posts 381 |
Tamma, Great poem!! And no matter what dont let anyone or anything take you away from what your heart desires, because in the end if you let them tear you away you can never come back to how it once was. To love is not a mistake, but to let someone take you way from that love is. I know you are going to stay with Justin, but i am just saying dont let them take you away from him or anything no matter what. Ok i am done now. Thanks for sharing the poem it was wonderful. Suit yourself~The most powerful phrase a person can ever say. Once you hear it you will never be the same. |
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LoveBug
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Member Elite
since 2000-01-08
Posts 4697 |
There's NOTHING wrong with rednecks, and I'll beat anyone who says that there is! (Offendin' my kinfolk! Sheesh!) Seriously, great expressions here, Tamma. Great new pic, too! Thanks for posting! "Where there is great love there are always miracles" -Cather "Love heals everything, and love is all there is"- Zukav |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Kinsfolk?.....uhhhh.......rrrrrright. Nice one here tamma......he IS your redneck! I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I'm in love with my shadow I admire it daily |
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DreadedLiver Member
since 2001-01-23
Posts 56Alter, Ego |
Oops, I posted with my other name! Damn, this is jeremydraul I chuckled at the title. I apologize for that! I thought it was humorous to refer to him as your redneck..lol. It must really suck to be in this predicament. I hope they finally realize how nice of a person you are. Take care.... Jeremy "zzzIzzzAMzzzJEREMYDRAULzzz" [This message has been edited by DreadedLiver (edited 02-04-2001).] |
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Jenn Cirrincione
since 2000-07-02
Posts 2107Fl |
Appearances mean little in the long run. All that matters is you are happy. And you seem to be, so good luck! And ignore the people who are ignorant. xoxo Jenn "I'm a big, big, girl, in a big, big world, it's not a big, big thing if you leave me, but I do feel, that I will miss you much..." Emilia |
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anonymousfemale Member Elite
since 2000-02-02
Posts 2797Limbo |
Tamma, you should seriously not give a rats about what other people think about Justin. You are crazy for him (if they can't see that they must be blind), so screw what others think ok. *note to self: Do not offend Lovebug and her kinsfolk* lol ~AF~ "Do not dwell in the past, do not dream of the future, concentrate the mind on the present moment." Buddha |
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Tamma
since 2000-01-17
Posts 794In His Arms, Harpers Ferry, WV |
Hehe LoveBug...I'm Just as much of a Redneck as any of 'em...cause as they say "There's a little Redneck in all of us" Sometimes I dress the part, Sometimes I dont. Oh well, even some of the Redneck around Jefferson call me a Redneck girl. Hehehehe...Some of them, ya just gotta love....like Justin and John Deere www.angelfire.com/wv2/poetrycorner I'm just a girl looking at a guy asking him to love me [This message has been edited by Tamma (edited 02-05-2001).] |
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Ina Senior Member
since 2000-10-09
Posts 1236Quebec, Canada |
Where exactly does one have to be from to be a redneck?jk. very simple and straight forward poem Tamma. good job. Regina for those who say I'm their friend, u know me not well for if u did u would not stay around anymore to watch me fall away. |
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Allysa
since 1999-11-09
Posts 1952In an upside-down garden |
Tamma, our Justin's are starting to sound quite alike! My Justin is a redneck too. There IS a little redneck in all of us, it just takes another redneck to bring it out!!! My dad makes fun of the way he talks, and how since I talk to him and he has an interesting vocabulary, I use some of his words. Anyways, you love that redneck and that's all that matters/ (Rednecks are very loveable!) Guys are like stars. There are millions of them, but only one will make your dreams come true. |
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