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DragonFang Senior Member
since 2000-03-09
Posts 522Missouri, USA |
... and hopefully this time my life wont get so buisy that I'll be leaving again  anyway, here is a short little thing that I wrote yesterday during american govt. class (this is the only productive thing I've ever done in that class). NOTE: this is came of absolute boredom and is just a random lil' thing that my mind came up with to amuse itself.Forgotten wishes, Forgotten lies, Forgotten promises, Forgotten ties, Forgotten words, Forgotten voices, Forgotten people, Forgotten choices, Forgotten places, Forgotten house, Forgotten happiness, Forgotten spouse... "Sa souvraya niende missian ye." \ I am lost in my own mind. |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Seems like a lot was forgotten. Hopefully it all comes back to you......nice one though. Good scheme.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I'm in love with my shadow I admire it daily |
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jeremydraul Senior Member
since 2000-08-01
Posts 1118State of Despair |
wow, the form made me dizzy great one though ~JDR "Most people are other people. Their thoughts are someone else's opinions, their lives a mimicry, their passions a quotation." -Oscar Wilde |
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keoni Senior Member
since 2000-10-16
Posts 850Up in the mountains in the NFC |
Yeah, the form was a little crazy, but it was good. Jon "Your anger is a gift"-Rage Against The Machine |
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Melster Member
since 2000-12-09
Posts 442Brisbane, Qld, Australia |
I put it all down to forgotten life... I feel the same way... I hope one day you can return... Great job on the poem though... I love it!! Kepp up the great work... Melz!! You can't hurt me anymore than I have hurt myself already... |
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Allan Riverwood
since 2001-01-04
Posts 3502Winnipeg |
Inspiring... Well written, interesting format. Eternal life without the darkness isn't life at all- it is a lobotomy. |
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DragonFang Senior Member
since 2000-03-09
Posts 522Missouri, USA |
Nah, *I* didn't really forget anything, other than the fact that I was supposed to be taking notes in class. ~_~ Anyway, glad that ye like it... 'tis good to be back "Sa souvraya niende missian ye." \ I am lost in my own mind. |
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Jenn Cirrincione
since 2000-07-02
Posts 2107Fl |
Kinda like staring at neon posterboard for a while... all blurry and crazy like. But I liked it, good work! xoxo Jenn "A person can never get over a broken heart if they aren't willing to let go of all of the pieces."-- ?? |
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Angel in Flight Member
since 2001-01-07
Posts 381 |
Very insperational poem you have here. Made me thing for a while who and what I have forgoten about and what I must do to remember and get back what I once had.Thank you for posting this. |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
Hey, welcome back I liked this one, it seems like it could be about anyone, yourself, a friend, someone you heard about while trying not to sleep in gov't class. nice job on the poem "Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Lakewalker http://www.thehungersite.com |
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