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Have You Ever (for Justin)
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Have You Ever (for Justin) |
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Allysa 
since 1999-11-09
Posts 1952In an upside-down garden 
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Have you ever wanted to say something, but you were too afraid to ask? Just building up a big brick wall, so forever it will last? Have you ever really wondered, what happens when you hang up the phone? If there was something I needed to say, and you left me all alone? Have you ever wanted to say, what goes on inside your head? And maybe shared a thought, instead of secrecy till your dead? Have you ever wanted something, so bad you would give anything, to have maybe one person back, who could just change everything? ---------------------------------------------------- Here I go again! I can't see at all. Even if I could it would all be great, to put your picture on my wall, it reminds me that it's not so bad, it's not so bad. |
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Elizabeth
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Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
Allysa~ I'm sure he has. Some guys (some, NOT all of them!) have a hard time saying how they feel and growing up. Great poem too. |
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Allan Riverwood
since 2001-01-04
Posts 3502Winnipeg |
Powerful... and a good experience. I read through the whole thing answering "yes." Well written, and very insightful. -Allan Would you really want everything that you thrive for, if you could never appreciate it? |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Well i can see Allan has returned. Anyway nice one here allysa, i felt the pain within the poem. I know it's hard but hey.......it's been a while eh?.....You'll make it through. Another wonferful poem by you!  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I'm in love with my shadow I admire it daily |
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jeremydraul Senior Member
since 2000-08-01
Posts 1118State of Despair |
ive read 4 of your poems today and this one is probably my favorite i totally understand what youre saying the best part was: "Have you ever wanted to say something, but you were too afraid to ask? Just building up a big brick wall, so forever it will last?" that was well written to say the least -JDR "I am two minded. I have two sides of thinking." |
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Tamma
since 2000-01-17
Posts 794In His Arms, Harpers Ferry, WV |
 ~*~ Tamma Loves Justin ~*~ < !signature-->www.angelfire.com/wv2/poetrycorner I'm just a girl looking at a guy asking him to love me [This message has been edited by Tamma (edited 01-30-2001).] |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
seem slike all the girls in passions is inloved with a Justin if it isn't some justin they actually know, it's that justin guy from nsync sup w/ the justins  kidding aside Allysa, i'm sorry you're hurting right now give him the poem or talk to him about this that's the best thing to do and if he really does care for you, he should respect your feeling towards this matter good luck Asylla I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR |
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Suga_Baby Member
since 2000-08-06
Posts 380Maine, USA |
This is so cute! I really liked it and I could totally relate to it! nice work  |
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Angel Bee Member
since 2001-01-30
Posts 176Virginia |
Good poem, I can realate very well at the moment. Keep writing.  )*~There are many things in life that will catch your eye, but only a few will catch your heart purse those~* |
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Allysa
since 1999-11-09
Posts 1952In an upside-down garden |
Thanks everyone! Por favor! Okay, I'm gonna stop the spanish due to the fact it confuses me! ANyways, everyone loves a Justin! Justin's are sweet ppl. This is the fourth one I have liked (and none of them had the last name Timberlake) b |
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