Teen Poetry #4 |
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All Reigning Defiance |
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Dopey Dope![]()
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico ![]() |
All Reigning Defiance: The conformity of speech. A raised hand to talk. Being free is thought, And thought is dead. Live to defy yourself. Die in spite of others. It's everything around. It's all that you are. ![]() I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I'm in love with my shadow I admire it daily |
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Hallie_Angel Member
since 2000-12-06
Posts 102 |
Great Job. And Yet another masterpiece! Always, ~Catherine |
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HiddenSparklez Member
since 2000-12-29
Posts 190British Columbia, Canada |
Short, but strong. ![]() "You do what you do, you say what you say, you try to be everything to everyone... come on now, do that stupid dance for me" -Everclear |
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CareBear3 Junior Member
since 2000-11-20
Posts 39New Hampshire |
I thought this was really insightful, its ironic that its words and thoughts that make us unique, but in reality what we say is just a mimic of what we are, its what we do that counts. At least thats what I saw in here nice job. "In great moments life seems neither right nor wrong but something greater it seems inevitable" ~Kelley |
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Angel in Flight Member
since 2001-01-07
Posts 381 |
*speechless*... Dopey That was soo wonderful, as well as held great power. How inspiring. Thank you for shareing this with us. *~*Amanda*~* What comes with love are tears of pain. What comes with hate are brighter days~ Amanda |
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katherine Member
since 2000-06-10
Posts 365Canberra Australia |
this is great! |
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litle_krazy_poet Member
since 2001-01-17
Posts 71 |
i just barly get it. but i like how short it is but still powerfull, that is the kind of poetry that i like somethings need poems and then there are thoes that are just for fun |
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TrueLUV Member
since 2000-07-19
Posts 158Connecticut, U.S.A. |
Powerful words I feel you |
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jeremydraul Senior Member
since 2000-08-01
Posts 1118State of Despair |
no idea what that was about i like the wordage im so lost... maybe its my sorrow kicking in please let us dig into the mind of the great dopey ~JDR "I am two minded. I have two sides of thinking." |
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~*Buffy Summers*~ Junior Member
since 2000-11-30
Posts 24Avondale,AZ,USA |
good one,,, I like it a lot. Just Thanking you for reading my poetry which in turn I like yours.... Kim Rayann |
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anomaly187 Member
since 2000-06-15
Posts 284San Francisco,CA,US |
Dopey!!..a society poem!!... finally, universal substance...i love it!!!... and can in all truth say i know exactly what it's about ..outstanding work "When the going gets weird, the weird turn pro" |
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DreadedLiver Member
since 2001-01-23
Posts 56Alter, Ego |
wow this was very neat i didnt even realize it might be about society until anonmaly stated it very great, bravo -Knightfellow ""I am two minded. I have two sides of thinking." |
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Allysa![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-09
Posts 1952In an upside-down garden |
Ha, ever so true now isn't it? I agree with Hallie. Love ya! Allysa I can't see at all. Even if I could it would all be great, to put your picture on my wall, it reminds me that it's not so bad, it's not so bad. |
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
oustanding Dopes I have wordto describe you and your writing "TALENT" I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
"Live to defy yourself." You know what? If I remember (highly unlikely) I'll do this tomorrow, just for you. Ok ![]() And yeah, I've been taking a little break from the forum for a few days. It started feeling like a chore instead of being enriched by the talent that is being shared. So now I'm half committed back into it, but homework sucks and I might be starting to get a life (ha) so I'll try to post when I can ![]() "Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Lakewalker http://www.thehungersite.com |
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Ina Senior Member
since 2000-10-09
Posts 1236Quebec, Canada |
it is a great poem. full of power. regina sin from my lips? O tresspass sweetly urged!give me my sin again! W. Skakespeare |
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