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hopeful Junior Member
since 2000-04-19
Posts 27 |
I wrote this for a school project and just thought i'd share it's the first time i've written one like this. Your love for me I hold so dear I cherish your words And love your touch please all comments are excepted |
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litle_krazy_poet Member
since 2001-01-17
Posts 71 |
ya i like it it is kinda like i like to write short simple but means a lot i like it keep it up somethings need poems and then there are thoes that are just for fun |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Kinda short but it gets down and dirty within the core of sentiments. I felt it.....nice one here.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I'm in love with my shadow I admire it daily |
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katherine Member
since 2000-06-10
Posts 365Canberra Australia |
this is sweet. |
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Allan Riverwood
since 2001-01-04
Posts 3502Winnipeg |
Touching in its simplicity. I should give this format a try... perhaps. -Allan Would you really want everything that you thrive for, if you could never appreciate it? |
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jeremydraul Senior Member
since 2000-08-01
Posts 1118State of Despair |
this was breviloquent i liked the style -JDR "I am two minded. I have two sides of thinking." |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
it makes a direct point...i like it, it's different I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR |
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Suga_Baby Member
since 2000-08-06
Posts 380Maine, USA |
Short, sweet, and to the point  I like it |
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