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Love's Addiction
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0 posted 2001-06-27 04:33 PM



You said you liked me,
but instead you left me lonely.
You pushed me back out into the cold,
another lie you have told.
Instead you went after her,
a lier and a thife is what you were.
You came and stole my heart,
then you left me to fall apart.
My emotions so confused and torn,
you're words pricked me like a thorn.
You said "let's just be friends",
and with her all your time you spend.
And while I'm left here to think,
my heart began to sink.
As the realization began to dawn,
in your game I was only a pawn...........

I can't hold on.....how do u think i've lost so much?....i'm so afraid....-Linkin Park

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LoneWolf
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1 posted 2001-06-27 04:43 PM


wow, this was great. i like it a lot. i could relate to this. good job here

It's too bad I'm not as wonderful a person as people say I am, because the world could use a few people like that.
I've learned that even when you th

Dopey Dope
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2 posted 2001-06-27 05:01 PM


People often compare the game of love to chess....being a pawn isn't always fun. Sorry you had to go through that.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

Love's Addiction
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3 posted 2001-06-27 05:24 PM


dopey, i'm sorry i'm going through this 2......it's very depressing. lonewolf, thanks for the reply, i appreciate it.

I can't hold on.....how do u think i've lost so much?....i'm so afraid....-Linkin Park

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4 posted 2001-06-27 05:53 PM


wow!...powerful and full of emotions...i really liked this poem...awesome job ...hop to see more...bye

im addicted to passions in poetry!...are you?

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