Teen Poetry #4 |
My Angels |
Poet on Acid Member
since 2001-01-07
Posts 325Florida, USA |
Somehow my angels are always there and for some reason my sorrows they always bare Always knowing they'll be there tomorrow My angels always care I don't know why but they're always there for one really messed up guy My angels have their own demons to fight still have found a place for me to hide from my night somewhere I can actually show my face so I must pause And thank my Angels I know this isn't the best but I consider this to be one of my better ones because it isn't all that dark. I wrote this to thank the family that has taken me in like one of their own even though they are having their own problems. They have given me a place to be myself and be accepted at the same time. Something I really never have had happen before. "It's too cold in the world...too cold to be alone..." - >¶Øʆ< |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
this is wonderful!! so sweet |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Well I liked this one too......a very nice poem written, for what seems to be, nice people. I enjoyed it. I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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fearing-laughter Senior Member
since 2001-04-24
Posts 605land of cheese (Wisconsin) |
aww this is so sweet! YaY! a happy poem. this was yayish tony, and i'm glad u found ur angels. don't be sad okay??? i love you too much =) -berg- emotions are like evil serpents that coil around your mind---me "i cannot save you, i can't even save myself"--stabbing westward |
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Love's Addiction Member
since 2001-06-21
Posts 57all around you |
i really liked this one even though it aint ur normal gloomy stuff. it was good. I can't hold on.....how do u think i've lost so much?....i'm so afraid....-Linkin Park |
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anonymous albert ?
since 2001-03-23
Posts 2979 |
nice...and the way youw rote it was enjoyable...great job!...bye im addicted to passions in poetry!...are you? |
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