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Poet on Acid
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0 posted 2001-06-26 06:29 PM



Somehow my angels are always there
and for some reason my sorrows
they always bare
Always knowing they'll be there tomorrow

My angels always care
I don't know why
but they're always there
for one really messed up guy

My angels have their own demons to fight
still have found a place
for me to hide from my night
somewhere I can actually show my face

so I must pause
And thank my Angels

I know this isn't the best but I consider this to be one of my better ones because it isn't all that dark. I wrote this to thank the family that has taken me in like one of their own even though they are having their own problems. They have given me a place to be myself and be accepted at the same time. Something I really never have had happen before.

"It's too cold in the world...too cold to be alone..." - >¶Øʆ<

© Copyright 2001 Tony Ryan Johnson - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2001-06-26 06:33 PM


this is wonderful!!   so sweet  
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2 posted 2001-06-27 02:08 AM


Well I liked this one too......a very nice poem written, for what seems to be, nice people.
I enjoyed it.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

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3 posted 2001-06-27 05:14 AM


aww this is so sweet! YaY! a happy poem.  this was yayish tony, and i'm glad u found ur angels.  don't be sad okay??? i love you too much =)
-berg-

emotions are like evil serpents that coil around your mind---me "i cannot save you, i can't even save myself"--stabbing westward

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4 posted 2001-06-27 04:08 PM


i really liked this one even though it aint ur normal gloomy stuff. it was good.

I can't hold on.....how do u think i've lost so much?....i'm so afraid....-Linkin Park

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5 posted 2001-06-27 06:15 PM


nice...and the way youw rote it was enjoyable...great job!...bye

im addicted to passions in poetry!...are you?

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