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Poet on Acid
Member

since 2001-01-07

Posts 325
Florida, USA

0 posted 2001-06-26 03:47 AM

I see her everyday
and always forget what to say
her blue eyes always entrance me
every damn time
it must be a crime
to want someone this much
I just wish I could touch
her smooth skin
this must be a sin
to want her like this
God damn it just one kiss

"It's too cold in the world...too cold to be alone..." - >¶ØÊ†<

fearing-laughter
Senior Member

since 2001-04-24

Posts 605
land of cheese (Wisconsin)

1 posted 2001-06-26 04:09 AM

hey this one is pretty...aww so sweet a semi love poem from tony...*sniffle* my poet on acid is all grown up and...being stalkerish to girls. j/k. this one is awesome too, yay for tony! *hugs*
-bergundy-

emotions are like evil serpents that coil around your mind---me "i cannot save you, i can't even save myself"--stabbing westward

keoni
Senior Member

since 2000-10-16

Posts 850
Up in the mountains in the NFC

2 posted 2001-06-26 01:36 PM

This one was nice. Not your best,but still good. Good luck with her.
Jon

"Your anger is a gift"-Rage Against The Machine
"Only God can judge me" Tupac Shakur

Love's Addiction
Member

since 2001-06-21

Posts 57
all around you

3 posted 2001-06-26 03:13 PM

i agree with jon, not ur best but still good none the less. good luck.

I can't hold on.....how do u think i've lost so much?....i'm so afraid....-Linkin Park

Dopey Dope

Moderator

Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

4 posted 2001-06-27 02:00 AM

This was great. I liked the power this poem had. Desire is a VERY strong thing and you displayed this well within the poem.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

anonymous albert ?

Member Elite

since 2001-03-23

Posts 2979

5 posted 2001-06-27 07:21 PM

wow!...this hit me hard for some reasons...awesome job! on protraying these feelings

...i really liked it...bye

im addicted to passions in poetry!...are you?

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