Teen Poetry #4 |
The Wounds |
Poet on Acid Member
since 2001-01-07
Posts 325Florida, USA |
It doesn't hurt anymore the pain went away I'm used to it now I grew acustom to it day by day The blood is like a friend now it keeps me company along with my own rotting gore they listen to me My wounds comfort me when I'm all alone they fill the space the empty void When all my angels leave to their homes my wounds listen to the thoughts of which I've toyed My angels they comfort me and help me forget my wounds but they have their own Their own wounds perhaps not as prevelant as mine but wounds all the same So I'm left to my own devices to overcome my pain sad to say that won't happen today "It's too cold in the world...too cold to be alone..." - >¶Øʆ< |
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fearing-laughter Senior Member
since 2001-04-24
Posts 605land of cheese (Wisconsin) |
hey tony..here's a thought...lol write something HAPPY. (kidding) i tried to write a happy poem, and it turned out like crap. i guess you're just good at depressing stuff, perhaps. this one was kool of yours, not my favorite, but still kool. well...later. -bergundy- emotions are like evil serpents that coil around your mind---me "i cannot save you, i can't even save myself"--stabbing westward |
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Love's Addiction Member
since 2001-06-21
Posts 57all around you |
this was good. nice job. I can't hold on.....how do u think i've lost so much?....i'm so afraid....-Linkin Park |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
I enjoyed this. Very sad ending there. Anyway you did really good on this one. I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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anonymous albert ?
since 2001-03-23
Posts 2979 |
sad...yet very interetsinga nd different perpective...i enjoyed it a lot...bye im addicted to passions in poetry!...are you? |
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