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Poet on Acid
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since 2001-01-07
Posts 325
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0 posted 2001-06-26 03:45 AM



It doesn't hurt anymore
the pain went away
I'm used to it now
I grew acustom to it day by day

The blood is like a friend now
it keeps me company
along with my own rotting gore
they listen to me

My wounds comfort me
when I'm all alone
they fill the space
the empty void

When all my angels
leave to their homes
my wounds listen to the thoughts
of which I've toyed

My angels
they comfort me
and help me forget my wounds
but they have their own

Their own wounds
perhaps not as
prevelant as mine
but wounds all the same

So I'm left
to my own devices
to overcome my pain
sad to say that won't happen today

"It's too cold in the world...too cold to be alone..." - >¶Øʆ<

© Copyright 2001 Tony Ryan Johnson - All Rights Reserved
fearing-laughter
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since 2001-04-24
Posts 605
land of cheese (Wisconsin)
1 posted 2001-06-26 04:03 AM


hey tony..here's a thought...lol write something HAPPY.  (kidding) i tried to write a happy poem, and it turned out like crap.  i guess you're just good at depressing stuff, perhaps.  this one was kool of yours, not my favorite, but still kool.  well...later.
-bergundy-

emotions are like evil serpents that coil around your mind---me "i cannot save you, i can't even save myself"--stabbing westward

Love's Addiction
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since 2001-06-21
Posts 57
all around you
2 posted 2001-06-26 03:15 PM


this was good. nice job.

I can't hold on.....how do u think i've lost so much?....i'm so afraid....-Linkin Park

Dopey Dope
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3 posted 2001-06-27 02:04 AM


I enjoyed this. Very sad ending there. Anyway you did really good on this one.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

anonymous albert ?
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4 posted 2001-06-27 07:15 PM


sad...yet very interetsinga nd different perpective...i enjoyed it a lot...bye

im addicted to passions in poetry!...are you?

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