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Over The Ledge of Love
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Over The Ledge of Love |
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Love's Addiction Member
since 2001-06-21
Posts 57all around you |
again, just venting. To many times, I've been burned. So away from love and life, I've turned. My life's going so fast, it's racing. Over and over the path of love, it has been tracing. And every time, I'd get hurt. And then I'd find someone else, and then we'd flirt. Why can't I stop? can't I just find one true love? Cause when I try, over the ledge by another shove. The ledge was to small for me, to be on too. And now look at me, with my life all askew. I can't seem to find anyone to love, unless, maybe's there is one guy........out there for me... I can't hold on.....how do u think i've lost so much?....i'm so afraid....-Linkin Park |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
enjoy the variety that's out there.....by dating lots of guys, you find out what you like, and what you don't. It's a good idea to date different people.....that way when you do find mr. right, you'll know he is, not just hope he is...  |
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Skyfire
since 2000-12-27
Posts 3381Riding |
Like Sea said, enjoy the variety. You may even find eventually that you like the flirting better than the catching. Don't wait around for one perfect guy, get out and enjoy life. Easier said than done I know, but believe me, once you enjoy your life, you'll find that you don't need a guy. And THAT, my dear, is when the guys will come crawling to you on their hands and knees, worshipping the ground you walk on. But know what? By that time, you won't care. That's just my experience (and many others) though. You gotta find out for yourself.  Happy hunting! Rhonda  "Amy, can you PLEASE come to Spain with us so that we have someone to keep Rhonda calm?" - Mr. Ardiel *insert hysterical laughter from me here* |
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Fading Away
since 2001-03-14
Posts 3131Lynchburg, Virginia |
I agree with what everyone else is saying. As hard as it may be to think it, or as much as it may hurt, enjoy flirting, and being single right now. You have all the time in the world to find the right one. And he will come, rest assured. I enjoyed this. Nice venting --Marie You can’t expect the roses to grow without the weeds. |
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Love's Addiction Member
since 2001-06-21
Posts 57all around you |
thanks, i dont really know what i'm doing about these guys i like, they just kinda popped into my life and i dont know who chose. i'm just really mixed up right now.  I can't hold on.....how do u think i've lost so much?....i'm so afraid....-Linkin Park |
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obscurity of cloud Member
since 2001-05-11
Posts 294....:::::******:::::.... |
you treat this topic very well but something about the verse seemed a little choppy...i don't know, it's appropriate i guess! good work "so when at times the mob is swayed to carry praise or blame too far, we may choose something like a star" --Frost |
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princess^sarah Member
since 2001-01-12
Posts 131melbourne |
As peeps say... There's plenty of fish in the sea Keep up the great work! |
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fearing-laughter Senior Member
since 2001-04-24
Posts 605land of cheese (Wisconsin) |
i know exactly how ya feel...i'm beginning to become all bitter n stuff like a really old chick who never found love. tis weird, but oh well. good poem, i feel the exact same way. i'd say it's good to know that there is someone else who feels the same, but that would pry be a bit sadistic :-p. good poem. thanks for the read. -fear- emotions are like evil serpents that coil around your mind---me "i cannot save you, i can't even save myself"--stabbing westward |
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Marshalzu
since 2001-02-15
Posts 2681Lurking |
Great work LA I really enjoyed the venting, keep up the good work Andrew |
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cherish Senior Member
since 2001-03-25
Posts 1639swimming in fairy floss........... |
And then I'd find someone else, and then we'd flirt. Why can't I stop? hahhaha...i think weve all been in that kind of prediciment at sum point in our lives....dont worry i think you find the best things when you just stop looking....keep posting i want to see more!! "Life is not long and boring, |
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Nicely done here!!  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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Poet on Acid Member
since 2001-01-07
Posts 325Florida, USA |
Nice. Sad, which I like, but with a rather nice hopeful ending. I like it. "It's too cold in the world...too cold to be alone..." - >¶Øʆ< |
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anonymous albert ?
since 2001-03-23
Posts 2979 |
it sad...but very true...i hope you find SOON that special person ...bye  im addicted to passions in poetry!...are you? |
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