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princess^sarah
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0 posted 2001-06-24 11:19 PM


Mykel.....

  Too Sweet to taste,
    Too hot too hold.
    Your mind like fire,
     Your heart like gold.

     Your lips are silky,
      My heart you stole.
     Your words like fire,
     They melt my soul.

     I love you dearly,
     Don't let me go.
     You're someone special,
     And I love you!!


Mykel.. you mean so much to me... your my whole life.. your the reason why i awake every morning...
your the love of my life and i love you!  

© Copyright 2001 sarah alford - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2001-06-25 12:07 PM


aaawww, that's so sweet! I hope he sees it!
Rhonda  

"Amy, can you PLEASE come to Spain with us so that we have someone to keep Rhonda calm?" - Mr. Ardiel *insert hysterical laughter from me here*

fearing-laughter
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since 2001-04-24
Posts 605
land of cheese (Wisconsin)
2 posted 2001-06-25 04:33 AM


wow this is kool...my thoughts on luv aren't the best now tho so i'll end this before i get all bitter.  good job sarah!
-fear-

"I know the pieces fit cause i watched them fall away"--TooL

Lord_Of_Confusion
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since 2001-06-24
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3 posted 2001-06-25 05:38 AM


aww thanku so much babe.... i love it!!!
Love's Addiction
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since 2001-06-21
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all around you
4 posted 2001-06-25 08:39 AM


wow this was really good. i liked it alot.

I can't hold on.....how do u think i've lost so much?....i'm so afraid....-Linkin Park

obscurity of cloud
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since 2001-05-11
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....:::::******:::::....
5 posted 2001-06-25 11:44 PM


awww we have little relationships blooming all around us...how sweet...  

"so when at times the mob is swayed to carry praise or blame too far, we may choose something like a star" --Frost

*ChrisLover*
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since 2000-08-02
Posts 46
erie, colo
6 posted 2001-06-25 11:53 PM


thats cute!! i have a love of my life too.... his name is chris ... and i am very happy .. you expresed feelings like i have for my boyfriend. i hope you two last forever! just like my boyfriend and i are going to. great post! i hope to see more. i liked the others too....
janette *chrislover*

Everything happens for a reason.. sometimes it's bad, but sometime it's good!! just remeber there's people out here who care!

cherish
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since 2001-03-25
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swimming in fairy floss...........
7 posted 2001-06-26 12:15 PM


short an sweet!!...hehehhe....nice post sarah!!..

"Life is not long and boring,
it's short and compelling." -Javier Agosto-

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8 posted 2001-06-26 01:05 AM


This was VERy well written. I really liked this one Sarah. Amazing stuff.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

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