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Nightingale Euphoria |
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Child of the Stars
since 2000-09-07
Posts 1658Ann Arbor, MI 
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Possible, is it, to capture all affairs of the heart? And if affairs are tangible, what texture do mine bear? Such doubts, such questions,insecurity... Positivity! Assurance now within my reach. Time and time together...time alone must be defeated. Oh Nightingale Euphoria, Oh! Cerulean sky... Offer peace to weary eye. "The eye sees a thing more clearly in dreams than the imagination awake." - Leonardo da Vinci [This message has been edited by Child of the Stars (edited 03-25-2001).] |
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Ina Senior Member
since 2000-10-09
Posts 1236Quebec, Canada |
i really liked this piece. but i might understand it more if i knew what the word euphoria meant? Regina |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Great job on this carly........u are a master of poetry. Wowwish.....you shure do write shome pwetty poetwy.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
 I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I'm in love with my shadow I admire it daily [This message has been edited by Dopey_Dope (edited 03-25-2001).] |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Sorry carly! I liked this poem so much I replied 3 times haha! Well *hands out cokes for everybody* sorry guys! *brings in some dancers* PARTY!!!!!  sorry carly!I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I'm in love with my shadow I admire it daily [This message has been edited by Dopey_Dope (edited 03-25-2001).] |
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Child of the Stars
since 2000-09-07
Posts 1658Ann Arbor, MI |
It's liek..a state of well-being. JAVI! ARE YOU MAD?!?!?!?! That's what I THOUGHT. "The eye sees a thing more clearly in dreams than the imagination awake." - Leonardo da Vinci [This message has been edited by Child of the Stars (edited 03-25-2001).] |
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Isabel Galaxia Senior Member
since 2000-06-18
Posts 733 |
Wow that was really good, I like it(obviously). Dopey...ahem  . Anyway good job Bel |
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Fading Away
since 2001-03-14
Posts 3131Lynchburg, Virginia |
Euphoria is a feeling of utter happiness. Great job, Carly Nice work here.  --Marie I never thought that you would ever be the one to let me down. I guess that just goes to show how wrong I always am. [This message has been edited by Fading Away (edited 03-25-2001).] |
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Allan Riverwood
since 2001-01-04
Posts 3502Winnipeg |
Yeah!!  *clears throat...* that is... YYYYEEEEAAAAAAHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!! *ahem* so yeah. You know what I think of this one, love. ~Allan If I had your eyes, I'd be blind. For I can only see out of my own. ~~Carly Van Dort |
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anonymousfemale Member Elite
since 2000-02-02
Posts 2797Limbo |
Did someone say party?!?!?!  woohoo!! *grabs one of Dopes' cokes and dances around* Great idea...Parties rock!!  er..Carly. A great piece for someone who was having trouble matching the images with the right words. ~AF~ Death is delightful. Death is dawn, the waking from a weary night of fevers unto truth and light. |
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Elizabeth
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Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
Yes Javier is mad, we all think so. Liked this one, Carly. |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
No Elizabeth, we all KNOW so This was written very well, awesome job  !"Be kind, for everyone you meet is fighting a hard battle" |
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IsGona Senior Member
since 2000-07-14
Posts 723 |
Hey carly you nknow I love it I think the below line was absolutly amazing """ Time and time together...time alone must be defeated. """ I am envious Jason |
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anomaly187 Member
since 2000-06-15
Posts 284San Francisco,CA,US |
*JUMPS FROM CHAIR APPLAUDING!* i have to say this is poetry at one of it's most beautiful forms..i absolutely loved this one carly..and don't forget to write another masterpiece..it's great to see your writing again too! "When the going gets weird, the weird turn pro" |
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UnPumpkin Junior Member
since 2001-03-25
Posts 18 |
(Dreamy reading and rereading of the mind-sugared verses.) |
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Deranger Member
since 2000-05-10
Posts 498Somewhere, between here and there |
*Jaw drops* (ouch, my jaw!) So, when did you offically graduate to poetic godliness... She's good, maybe too good. I say we lynch her!!! Lynch! Lynch! Lynch! Spreading insanity, one post at a time |
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Child of the Stars
since 2000-09-07
Posts 1658Ann Arbor, MI |
Lol....loFREAKINloud...I LOVE YOU GUYS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!*hugs everyone and kisses almost everyone on the cheek* And Deranger....you bess watch your back! ~Carly "The eye sees a thing more clearly in dreams than the imagination awake." |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
WHAM!!! That is the most beautiful poem....... I don't even know why I post my poems beside yours Carly...you're all that and a bag of chips "So long as men can breathe or eyes can see, |
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banburycross Senior Member
since 2001-03-27
Posts 946viginia |
This is truly beautiful writing, the wording in this piece was incredible. You are a very talented writer and i look forward to reading more of your work. Sometimes, the things that go unsaid are the only things worth hearing. |
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knightlyshadows Senior Member
since 2001-04-14
Posts 791obscured vision |
*cough*bump*cough* heh yea i likededs this muchs carlAy!:P i think tis excellent! im envious :p heh great job!! *hugs* love u muchs tiff “A single choice can build destinies,or destroy them.” |
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Skyfire
since 2000-12-27
Posts 3381Riding |
*sigh* If only I could do that... but never mind. As long as Carly keeps it up I'll be happy. I like, I like, I like! I think I'll have one of those Cokes, man! Anyway, excellent as usual, and yeah. That is just beautiful. Rhonda  "Amy, can you PLEASE come to Spain with us so that we have someone to keep Rhonda calm?" - Mr. Ardiel *insert hysterical laughter from me here* |
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fozzyozzy Member
since 2001-03-15
Posts 336Lessburg Virginia |
this is really a magnificent piece i hope you are incredibly proud of yourself. This writing was profound to the p (or whatever that means). "This is cactus land!!!"-T.S.Eliot |
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obscurity of cloud Member
since 2001-05-11
Posts 294....:::::******:::::.... |
this is so absolutely beautiful it transcends the words you've written. I love it, i love it, i love it. Into the library with you. and i still love the Frost"so when at times the mob is swayed to carry praise or blame too far, we may choose something like a star" --Frost |
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cherish Senior Member
since 2001-03-25
Posts 1639swimming in fairy floss........... |
arrrrrgggggggghhhhhhhh *runs blinded by the brilliance of this poem*.....carly you already know that im jealous of your stuff...this is as usual- EXCELLENT!!!.. .....your poetry is always a treat!!! ....agpfagp!!! |
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