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The Kiss of Poison
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The Kiss of Poison |
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xShUgArHiGhx 
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
Picked up the phone when you called, Last night changed my life. Your words struck me like a knife in my heart, You told me you had to tell me the truth and u have lied... You told me what happened, Each tear struck my face like poison to my soul. You kissed another girls lips, And it was only one night ago. Hung up the phone and ran to mommy's arms, Wet her shoulder with tears of pain. "I trusted him mommy...he said he'd never break my heart", My mom started to cry and told me im not the one at blame. I look in the mirror now and see a blotchy faced girl, I knew her an hour ago but no longer do I wish the mirror would lie to me and tell me what i see isnt real, That the tears on my face weren't caused by you. But of course it cant tell me, Mirrors do not lie, fib or decieve. When u look in a mirror, You never have to worry wether or not to believe. I cant look at you the same anymore, Your not the guy i thought you were. Your evil and decieving and selfish, I was replaced by a girl w/no name, Only being referred to as "her." Now what am i suppose to do? I'm lost, abandoned and confused. You want me to forgive and understand, But how do i accept this abuse? Its true what they say, One kiss can ruin a human life. I just never thought that it would ruin, What was suppose to be the love of all time... |
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DarkAngelOfTheStars Member
since 2001-04-21
Posts 255 |
oh my....WOW  this is so sad, really good though i loved it and its going in my library...*hugz* i hope everything is ok. i love it  one morning you wake up afraid you are going to live |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
this breaks my heart and makes me want to smack him one..... what a jerk!!ahhhhha! Don't let him do it to you a second time, hold your head high, as you are worth so much more! |
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Linc
since 2001-03-07
Posts 552The Backstreet Boy |
Hey, I am so sorry, I love the poem though! I am puttin it in my library. Until your next work of art -- Linc "Blood Moon" |
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anonymous albert ?
since 2001-03-23
Posts 2979 |
wow!...this had some powerful emotions...very sad...hope things are ok ...bye Michele  im addicted to passions in poetry!...are you? |
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Fading Away
since 2001-03-14
Posts 3131Lynchburg, Virginia |
Very beautiful poem. This is so sad... My favorite lines were: "I wish the mirror would lie to me and tell me what i see isnt real, That the tears on my face weren't caused by you." That hit home hard. I've been there not long ago at all, and that feeling is so familiar to me. Wow, this poem is awesome. Very well done. I enjoyed every word. --Marie "Well the sun is slowly sinking down, but the moon is slowly rising. So this old world must still be spinning ‘round, and I still love you."–James T. |
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Shygirl82 Member
since 2001-02-19
Posts 245Ilinois |
Sweetie I am so sorry..some guys can be such jerks. Like Marie..this hit very close to home, and I know that it hurts. This was such an excellent poem eventhough what you had to go through to write it sucked majorly. Just remember to take it one day at a time...*hugs* to you.... ~Nikki~ [This message has been edited by Shygirl82 (edited 06-25-2001).] |
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zarina Member
since 2001-05-19
Posts 180 |
Very sad..but I liked it. |
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cherish Senior Member
since 2001-03-25
Posts 1639swimming in fairy floss........... |
awwww this is so sad michele....i feel for you hun...*hugs*....you want me to kick the jerk in the knees for you?..i hope you find happiness soon...*hugs*..i liked the poem a lot..i think the first ive read from you....i enjoyed it thoroughly |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Yes, quite a sad one but stay strong. I really enjoyed this one.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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keoni Senior Member
since 2000-10-16
Posts 850Up in the mountains in the NFC |
Oh man! I'm sorry to hear that this happened. This poem was so sad. I can relate cause the same thing has happened to me( see it isn't always the guy's fault). This was a really beautiful poem. It makes me get a big knot in my chest. Hope things get better. Jon "Your anger is a gift"-Rage Against The Machine |
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Love's Addiction Member
since 2001-06-21
Posts 57all around you |
this was really sad but really good. u've written ur feelings nicely.hope u feel better soon.  I can't hold on.....how do u think i've lost so much?....i'm so afraid....-Linkin Park |
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TopGunLauren Senior Member
since 2000-08-02
Posts 718California |
Great poem keep up the awsome work! Lauren |
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