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Love's Addiction Member
since 2001-06-21
Posts 57all around you |
sorry about this one......i'm really just venting on this. All these mixed emotions, I think my head's gonna explode! Emotions for two different guys, the hatred for my stepdad. The love for music, and the passion for writing poetry. The love for TWO guys? how can that be? I'm so messed up right now, how can i decide? I DON'T know! AAAAHhhhh all this _! it's making my head spin! I don't think I can take it any more! Someone save me from this enfernal place! I can't hold on.....how do u think i've lost so much?....i'm so afraid....-Linkin Park [This message has been edited by Dopey_Dope (edited 06-26-2001).] |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
sounds like you've got a lot emotionally going on right now......you're young, it's ok to love two guys.....just don't lie about it  |
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Skyfire
since 2000-12-27
Posts 3381Riding |
Ah, don't worry about loving two guys. It's when you love three or four at the same time that it gets tricky!  And don't apologize for your poetry, no matter what, alright? Poems are usually lovey and sappy (nothing wrong with those ones!). It's nice to get vents once in a while to shake us up!Rhonda  "Amy, can you PLEASE come to Spain with us so that we have someone to keep Rhonda calm?" - Mr. Ardiel *insert hysterical laughter from me here* |
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Fading Away
since 2001-03-14
Posts 3131Lynchburg, Virginia |
Nice vent. It's always good to write when you feel overwhelmed like this. Nice work. It sounds like a tough situation. I wish you the best of luck. --Marie You can’t expect the roses to grow without the weeds. |
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Love's Addiction Member
since 2001-06-21
Posts 57all around you |
i was So p.o.ed when i wrote this one. i thought i was gonna punch someone , so what i did was i wrote this. it helped alot. thanks for replying.  I can't hold on.....how do u think i've lost so much?....i'm so afraid....-Linkin Park |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Nice vent here......I edited a word due to the astrixes....not alloud here Anyhow, nicely done.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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anonymous albert ?
since 2001-03-23
Posts 2979 |
i liekd the poem...powerful emotions on such different things...some i can realte...hope it gets better ...bye.im addicted to passions in poetry!...are you? |
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TopGunLauren Senior Member
since 2000-08-02
Posts 718California |
You express your emotions very well and this is an awsome poem, Keep up the awsome work I hope to read more of your poems. Lauren |
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anonymousfemale Member Elite
since 2000-02-02
Posts 2797Limbo |
A great poetic vent. Lots of emotion and you really spark off some creative thoughts. Just watch for spelling errors in the future. It takes away from the piece otherwise. Thanks for sharing. ~AF~ "Kelly's my Hero!" "No, Kelly's your heroine." "Kelly has heroin??" "What?" |
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