Teen Poetry #4 |
Struggles |
fozzyozzy Member
since 2001-03-15
Posts 336Lessburg Virginia |
Struggles She sits Sipping her coffee she deserves What is she thinking twirling the straw? She looks For my comment it's dry at the back of my throat What does she expect, she choaks me up Everyone else can see who she has told My innocuous remark rings within mine ears And tingles her neck to twist towards me Really. That is what I said (if I could remember) The center of a joke I wonder when she's coming back Is this jazz great or what I hum What do these people think they are looking at? It's not as if I poored her drink in my lap She threw it there herself Bamboozled and such but alas It was her drink not mine But the pants, the pants! (put on a show) Red with rage I order an iced frappe to go What's vengeance with a dry throat? At least it's cold ----------------------- I felt like writing something funny, so why not start with my own train of thought? "This is cactus land!!!"-T.S.Eliot |
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Fading Away
since 2001-03-14
Posts 3131Lynchburg, Virginia |
I like this, Foz. It's different from what I've read by you. I enjoyed it. nice work. --Marie [This message has been edited by Fading Away (edited 06-24-2001).] |
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FoxXena Member
since 2001-06-13
Posts 141where dragons play, children run free and foxes are never hunted |
Like my boyfriend on our first date. ~*~It is said that laughter is the shortest distance between two people...~*~ |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Holy! This was amazing. One of my most favs by you! SO awesome. I really really really liked this one fozzy! Simply superb!!! Wowness here.....10! I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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cherish Senior Member
since 2001-03-25
Posts 1639swimming in fairy floss........... |
I order an iced frappe to go What's vengeance with a dry throat? At least it's cold hehehheheheh....cool...sean you are a KRASSY one arent you?...that made me laugh...ok for a crazy minded poet you are really good... for this one too!!..agpfagp!!! "Life is not long and boring, |
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