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Smiles (a happy one finally!) lol
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Smiles (a happy one finally!) lol |
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Cinch01 Junior Member
since 2001-06-19
Posts 14RS, BR |
Ok, this is not my best work but I just felt like writting it so... Smiles She wakes up every morning And closes her eyes once again She thinks about What she left behind. She thinks about The day she has to face. Lost loves, Found families. Lost dreams, Found aspirations. She sits on her bed As she opens her eyes. She gazes around her room For almost a minute. The clock sais It is time to get up. As she gets dressed She takes a deep breath And smells the coffe aroma in the air. She hears the children outside Laughing and playing. As she looks by the window She sees that the sun is shining The birds are singing And the world is spinning As she gets outside She can feel the gentle breeze Carassing her soft skin. She glances to the sky And she sees the hidding rainbow. And so, finally, With peace in her heart And happiness inside, She SMILES. |
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anonymous albert ?
since 2001-03-23
Posts 2979 |
beautiful images...i liked it a lot and the end ended it very well  ...great job!...bye  im addicted to passions in poetry!...are you? |
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FoxXena Member
since 2001-06-13
Posts 141where dragons play, children run free and foxes are never hunted |
This reminds me of a poem that I wrote about smiles: /pip/Forum49/HTML/000019.html ~*~It is said that laughter is the shortest distance between two people...~*~ |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Nicely done here. very happy ending. I liked it a lot.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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