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Love's Addiction
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since 2001-06-21

Posts 57
all around you

0 posted 2001-06-23 05:07 PM

kinda short but o well....

When you speak your words caress me,
like a soft, gentle kiss.
And when you're around,
it fills me with such bliss.
I love seeing your smile,
and I love it when you laugh.
I've never felt this way,
never, not even half.
Cause when I see you,
I know we were ment to be.
And soon maybe more........

if love wants me, then it can come find me
if music was a weapon, many ppl would be dead

Skyfire

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since 2000-12-27

Posts 3381
Riding

1 posted 2001-06-23 07:51 PM

Sometimes the short ones are the best ones so don't worry about the length. This is very good, I like it a lot!(there I go with the creative comments again)
Rhonda

"Amy, can you PLEASE come to Spain with us so that we have someone to keep Rhonda calm?" - Mr. Ardeil *insert hysterical laughter from me here*

Fading Away

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since 2001-03-14

Posts 3131
Lynchburg, Virginia

2 posted 2001-06-23 08:56 PM

Length has nothing to do with the quality of the poem. Nice work. Very sweet... I enjoyed this.

--Marie

"Well the sun is slowly sinking down, but the moon is slowly rising. So this old world must still be spinning 'round. And I still love you." –James T

fozzyozzy
Member

since 2001-03-15

Posts 336
Lessburg Virginia

3 posted 2001-06-23 11:35 PM

I've only heard complaints about the epic pieces here lol so don't worry about length.( i could say size doesn't matter, but that would be childish

) Anyway, this poem right here is good keep it up.

"This is cactus land!!!"-T.S.Eliot

Cinch01
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since 2001-06-19

Posts 14
RS, BR

4 posted 2001-06-23 11:39 PM

SOOOOOOOOOO SWEET!!!!

Remember: Lenght isn't everything. *L* Not exactly like that but it count's right?

"Love like yuo never been hurt, live like today was the last day and dance like no one is watching."

anonymous albert ?

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since 2001-03-23

Posts 2979

5 posted 2001-06-24 01:46 AM

i look at the meaning of the poem..so no worries

...great job! though...this was a very sweet poem...i enjoyed it...bye

im addicted to passions in poetry!...are you?

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

6 posted 2001-06-26 12:43 PM

Just cuz it's short doesn't mean it's bad. I liked it.....I like short ones......A lot of emotional content within this one. You did a fine job.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

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