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Ina
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since 2000-10-09
Posts 1236
Quebec, Canada

0 posted 2001-06-22 04:10 PM


Hey ive been away...hope everyone is chilling and enjoying summer.

TO:Regina

Dear Me,

Well after 14 years
Ive noticed a lot of things
fun things, sad things
Ive made friends
lost friends
learned that some poetry
is not acceptable for this
forum, while alot is
Here is a little reminder
live life to its fullest
Give up on the misery
let go of revenge and grudges
block out those who bug
the hell out of me
embrace the ones I care about
Open my eyes with Brad
because I know he loves me
Let go of those here
don't get attached
let the world just slide right
over me
Live in the old regina
laid back raver chick
with lots of friends
forget the fantasy
let live the old
party animal
put on some drum and bass
some NOFX
Let the RESET play
E-ROTIC blends
just let go
let the old regina
seep back

Regina

i seriously hope you mods dontkill this one....

If you only understood my pain then maybe you could learn to be my friend. Be there. My crying shoulder. The smiles. And the caring i need to survive.

© Copyright 2001 Regina Levy - All Rights Reserved
Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
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Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico
1 posted 2001-06-22 04:37 PM


I see no problem with this one at all. Why would we close this one?
I liked it......be happy.....that's all I want Regi. I hope all runs well with you.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

obscurity of cloud
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since 2001-05-11
Posts 294
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2 posted 2001-06-22 05:12 PM


tres bien fait!  I LOVE nofx, great mention.  I like this poem a lot!  Very introspective; that's important.

"so when at times the mob is swayed to carry praise or blame too far, we may choose something like a star" --Frost

DarkAngelOfTheStars
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since 2001-04-21
Posts 255

3 posted 2001-06-22 05:13 PM


i really liked this nice job keep it up  

one morning you wake up afraid you are going to live

anonymous albert ?
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4 posted 2001-06-23 12:14 PM


umm.yea...very interesting poem...i enjoyed the reda ...bye Ina

im addicted to passions in poetry!...are you?

Marshalzu
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5 posted 2001-06-23 11:19 AM


Good work Regina, i really enjoyed the read.
Zu  

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6 posted 2001-06-23 01:38 PM


Good work, Regina.  I enjoyed this... I hope you feel better... be happy... smile   Nice work.

--Marie

"Well the sun is slowly sinking down, but the moon is slowly rising. So this old world must still be spinning ‘round, and I still love you."–James T.

the_rescue
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since 2001-05-23
Posts 316
Japan
7 posted 2001-06-24 11:55 PM


regina right on good job I liked it a lot but I have always liked your stuff so what should I have expected lol.

I'm not asking U 2 luv me I'm just letting out the truth no hold barred about what I feel nothing wrong with what I say

keoni
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since 2000-10-16
Posts 850
Up in the mountains in the NFC
8 posted 2001-06-25 09:50 AM


Ina, this is a pretty good one. Not as good as most of your work, but good as always. Oh yeah, NOFX kicks ass!
Jon

"Your anger is a gift"-Rage Against The Machine
"Only God can judge me" Tupac Shakur

cherish
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since 2001-03-25
Posts 1639
swimming in fairy floss...........
9 posted 2001-06-26 12:40 PM


ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh i like this one a lot regi *does the happy dance*....its a good reflection ....i love it cuz it shows you for you....this ones going in the library for the sheer reason that its honest and uncliched....youre a great writer-poet regi...keep with the posts..and annoy them mods silly....ok ...no dont take that piece of advice... ....

"Life is not long and boring,
it's short and compelling." -Javier Agosto-

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