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Early in the Morning
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Early in the Morning |
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Love's Addiction Member
since 2001-06-21
Posts 57all around you |
this is short but i had 2 write it down. it aint the greatest but tell me what u think n e ways. I've just woke up, and already you're on my mind. It's so early in the morning, and I'm talking to you. We talk about nothing, and it's just as fun. Soon we will meet, and then we will talk.......... Or maybe not! if love wants me, then it can come find me |
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Linc
since 2001-03-07
Posts 552The Backstreet Boy |
Hey, Very nice  short and sweet (just the way I like them) Until your next poem-- Linc "Blood Moon" |
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anonymous albert ?
since 2001-03-23
Posts 2979 |
the last line gave a twist to the poem...i liked that...nice poem...great job!...bye  im addicted to passions in poetry!...are you? |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Haha yea the last line just came out of nowhere. Really surprised me. I smiled....I liked it a lot.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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Fading Away
since 2001-03-14
Posts 3131Lynchburg, Virginia |
The twist at the end was pretty interesting. I liked this. GOod job. --Marie "Well the sun is slowly sinking down, but the moon is slowly rising... so this old world must still be spinning 'round. And I still love you." -James |
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Marshalzu 
since 2001-02-15
Posts 2681Lurking |
Short and sweet, thanks for sharing. Andrew |
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Skyfire
since 2000-12-27
Posts 3381Riding |
I like all of it except the last line. It takes away from the poem somehow... The rest of it's great though! Rhonda  "Amy, can you PLEASE come to Spain with us so that we have someone to keep Rhonda calm?" - Mr. Ardeil *insert hysterical laughter from me here* |
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