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angel_2401 Member
since 2001-06-12
Posts 131Cincinnati, OH 
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Hand in Hand When I first met you I didn't like you much We always picked on you Called you names Then you were in two of my classes I saw who you were When I got hurt, you helped me Then I fell in love. Not long after that We started dating We were in heaven I was so happy You were too We were in love I thought it would never end Then you said you had to tell me something In your hazel eyes I could see confusion and a little sadness I know your love for me was gone I was left alone You told me you wanted to be friends Now it's all over Here I still stand Waiting for you to come back Because I still love you I hope you love me too In my dreams we get back together Walking hand in hand. I don't have an attitude problem You have a perception problem. |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Welcome! Please check your email for a special greeting!  ~SEA |
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stace_co2003 Member
since 2001-03-30
Posts 497In a dream world |
KRISSY!!!!!!!!!  hey sis! so, like, I like this poem, right? but well, like, you know that! (I'm am so acting like a prep) oh and like, (heehee)IT IS TOO GOOD!!!!!! don't be so down on yerself all the time. love ya Stace I don't have an attitude problem You have a perception problem. |
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Linc
since 2001-03-07
Posts 552The Backstreet Boy |
Hey, Wonderful start, the poem is superb. I can ell if you keep writting like this you will be one of my fav. Welcome to Passions by the way Until your next poem-- Linc "Once you reach your original goal it seems that the journey was your real accomplishment." |
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fractal007 Senior Member
since 2000-06-01
Posts 1958 |
Nice poem., Very emotional. I am glad you posted this one. Welcome to Passions. I hope you like it here as much as I do.  "If history is to change, let it change. If the world is to be destroyed, so be it. If my fate is to die, I must simply laugh" |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
I liked this one.....Welcome to Passions! This really displayed a lot of emotion..very out there kind of style. I liked it! Hope to see more from you!  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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xShUgArHiGhx
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
WELCOME TO PASSIONS!!!!!!!!!!!! Welcome!!! I really ejoyed your first post here...i cant wait to see more from you...keep postin! |
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TopGunLauren Senior Member
since 2000-08-02
Posts 718California |
Welcome to Passions!Great first poem keep up the awsome work. Lauren |
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the_rescue Member
since 2001-05-23
Posts 316Japan |
that rocked I hate situations like that I've been in a couple and well they just all out stink. I really like your style though it's cool. in the silence of the night I hear angels voices singing your name oh how beautiful is your name as they sing over and over. (SPOKEN) |
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Skyfire
since 2000-12-27
Posts 3381Riding |
Welcome to Passions!  I know you'll love it here! That was an awesome poem, and as to how you can improve your writing, well, I don't have anything to say right now. It was fine for me! Hope you have fun here, and keep up the writing! Rhonda "Who did that?" "Charlie and Blake." "Who's Charlie and Blake?" "Rhonda and Amy." |
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Jenn Cirrincione
since 2000-07-02
Posts 2107Fl |
Welcome, welcome!! This was really great, very emotional, and I hope that if it's true to life, it all works out in the end. Jenn "If it's wrong to love you, then my heart just won't let me be right, cause I'm drowned in you, and I won't pull through without you by my side." Mari |
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anonymous albert ?
since 2001-03-23
Posts 2979 |
WELCOME TO PASSIONS ...great first post...i liked the emotions in here...and i hope things are better for you...bye Kristen  im addicted to passions in poetry!...are you? |
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Fading Away
since 2001-03-14
Posts 3131Lynchburg, Virginia |
welcome to passions The emotions in this piece are awesome. very nice first post, i look forwarf to reading more. nicely done. --Marie "You're the girl of my nightmares, erotic and skull-faced. |
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Marshalzu
since 2001-02-15
Posts 2681Lurking |
Welcome to Passions Kristen, I really enjoyed the read, It's a great first post and very well done Zu |
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angel_2401 Member
since 2001-06-12
Posts 131Cincinnati, OH |
Thanks for all the replies you guys, I appreciate it. I don't have an attitude problem You have a perception problem. |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
I know I'm late at this but..... WELCOME TO PASSIONS!!! Thanks for deciding to join us here in Passions for Poetry. I see Stace did convince you. Well, it already does seem like you are beginning to love this place as much as we all do. Happy posting and reading as well. hi Sweets, Kris, Lizzy, Ina, Erin, Erica, Minna, Kit, Kamie, Javi, Jenn, Sharon, Nan, Cawlee, Cherish, Ashley, Sara, Justine, Leah, Jess, Kimmie, Mare |
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Cinch01 Junior Member
since 2001-06-19
Posts 14RS, BR |
Hey sis! I love your poem! Hey, don't worry, heads up, you'll survive, I did. I think I did anyway. lol Just keep writing it helps. Once again, I loved it! "Love like yuo never been hurt, live like today was the last day and dance like no one is watching." |
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fozzyozzy Member
since 2001-03-15
Posts 336Lessburg Virginia |
Wilkommen Great first post I know you'll be posting a lot more now. I guess my job will be to keep reading them "This is cactus land!!!"-T.S.Eliot |
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fozzyozzy Member
since 2001-03-15
Posts 336Lessburg Virginia |
Wilkommen Great first post I know you'll be posting a lot more now. I guess my job will be to keep reading them "This is cactus land!!!"-T.S.Eliot |
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