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A Perfect Night
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A Perfect Night |
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Tamma
since 2000-01-17
Posts 794In His Arms, Harpers Ferry, WV 
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~*~ For Will ~*~ ~010621~ Lying in bed next to you, Looking up at the stars. Wrapped in your arms, Without a word spoken. Listening to “Our Song,” Snuggled together as one. You sing to me, And I get lost in your eyes. A slight wind blows, Making me shiver, You pulled me closer, And wrapped your arms around me. You took my hand, And pulled it to your chest. Looked into my eyes, And told me you love me. *sigh* nobody cares |
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obscurity of cloud Member
since 2001-05-11
Posts 294....:::::******:::::.... |
this is very sweet! What a perfect night indeed. "so when at times the mob is swayed to carry praise or blame too far, we may choose something like a star" --Frost |
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AngelPoet87 Member
since 2001-04-21
Posts 280Indy |
Really sweet, good images. |
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Fading Away
since 2001-03-14
Posts 3131Lynchburg, Virginia |
That does sound like a perfect night. *sigh* This one hit hard. It's very sweet. Nice work, Tamma. --Marie "Well the sun is slowly sinking down, but the moon is slowly rising... so this old world must still be spinning 'round. And I still love you." -James |
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anonymous albert ?
since 2001-03-23
Posts 2979 |
such beautiful images...i really like dthis pome...youw rote this so well  ...bye Tamma  im addicted to passions in poetry!...are you? |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Very sweet Tamma.....hope it lasts long |
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