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0 posted 2001-06-21 08:29 AM


i know a boy named jimmy.
hes kinda sweet but then kinda mean.
hes only mean to girls.
lucky me i'm a girl.

you can't help but fall in love with him.
hes such a hottie.
but then again.........

hes sweet and caring.
don't tell him bad things bout dogwood,
he'll get fiesty!


this boy i know.
i have known for a while.
so the things i say,
shall not be held against me!

ok  yall know jimmmy. hes just a dork. hes not really mean. hes such a sweetheart! i love him to death.
robin

  

I AM WHAT I AM SO DEAL!

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1 posted 2001-06-21 08:37 AM


Ok I'm Jimmy and here's the real deal
like girls never understand how a guy feels
see I'm not nice at all I just appear to be
I think saying I'm sweet is a conspiracy
don't say I'm sweet cause I'm rotten as a skunk
I mean common think about it I'm a punk
so to say that I'm sweet at all is such a lie
I think that before being sweet I'd rather eat arsenic and die

I mean not that it's a bad thing or all
I just don't want the public to see me fall
fall into some helpless romantic state
where I end with some horrible tragic fate
SO don't call me sweet and don't diss dogwood
cause if you do I'll call my boyz in the hood

I'm not asking U 2 luv me I'm just letting out the truth no hold barred about what I feel nothing wrong with what I say

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2 posted 2001-06-21 08:42 AM


you're a sweetheart admit it! you always watch out for me!
robin
  

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3 posted 2001-06-21 08:46 AM


ha watch out for you, I'm just covering my own butt lol jk
I'm not a sweetheart maybe a sweaty heart but sweet never! lol

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4 posted 2001-06-21 11:52 AM


haha this is cute...I enjoyed it.

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5 posted 2001-06-21 04:01 PM


Uh oh.. cat fight.. hehe, j/k.  This is cute.  Nicely done, Robin.

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6 posted 2001-06-21 04:03 PM


tks all! i love my jimmy hes like a big bro to me hes always watching out for me!
robin

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7 posted 2001-06-21 04:29 PM


Why can't we all just get along ?!?!?!?! Oh... uh... sorry, got a little carried away there... LOL... you two are great, and I love the response! Then again I love the first poem... Hmmmm... I think there's a conspiracy to make me think... Ow! Anyway you two, seriously, that was great!  

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8 posted 2001-06-22 02:53 AM


I liked this one........sounds like you care for him hehe

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

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