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MoeRocko Member
since 2001-04-25
Posts 166West Virginia |
They say the best things in life are Free I say the best thing in life is free... People believe People fight People strive People all want to be Free I know why I'm Free People who never knew me, died for me Why do they call it Free? The thing they call Free Came at a terrible price The price for Freedom The best thing in life is Free... Castles made of sand, slip into the sea eventually... |
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keoni Senior Member
since 2000-10-16
Posts 850Up in the mountains in the NFC |
This one is bad, It is so true. "War is peace, Ignorance is strength, and Slavery is freedom" Excellent post. Jon "Your anger is a gift"-Rage Against The Machine |
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keoni Senior Member
since 2000-10-16
Posts 850Up in the mountains in the NFC |
Just wanted to double post to make you happy!  "Your anger is a gift"-Rage Against The Machine |
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Skyfire 
since 2000-12-27
Posts 3381Riding |
I like this one a lot! You're definatly right about freedom coming at a terrible price. Very deep! Rhonda  "Who did that?" "Charlie and Blake." "Who's Charlie and Blake?" "Rhonda and Amy.""Great. There goes the school." |
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stace_co2003 Member
since 2001-03-30
Posts 497In a dream world |
yes, our freedom did come at a terrible price. thanks for sharing this!! it's a great poem!! but I have to go cuz my fave song just came on the radio... I don't have an attitude problem You have a perception problem. |
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anonymous albert ?
since 2001-03-23
Posts 2979 |
very nice message to it...i liked it  ...bye Ewok  im addicted to passions in poetry!...are you? |
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Ina Senior Member
since 2000-10-09
Posts 1236Quebec, Canada |
This one was good. intersting message |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
I enjoyed this a lot....provoked a lot of thoughts..... like... honestly, how free do you think you are in contrast to how free you TRULY are?  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
that was an interesting read. thanks for sharing. keep it up hi Sweets, Kris, Lizzy, Ina, Erin, Erica, Minna, Kit, Kamie, Javi, Jenn, Sharon, Nan, Cawlee, Cherish, Ashley, Sara, Justine, Leah, Jess, Kimmie, Mare |
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obscurity of cloud Member
since 2001-05-11
Posts 294....:::::******:::::.... |
very thought provoking. And i like jon's comment from 1984  "so when at times the mob is swayed to carry praise or blame too far, we may choose something like a star" --Frost |
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Cinch01 Junior Member
since 2001-06-19
Posts 14RS, BR |
I totally agree. Being free is the most important thing in my opinion and we all know (hopefully) that it didn't happened over night. Anyway, I really liked your poem. It's good. "Love like yuo never been hurt, live like today was the last day and dance like no one is watching." |
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punkrockerrobin
since 2001-05-15
Posts 1180Sparks, NV |
number 5 is alive! hehe great poem ewok! *hugs* robin  I AM WHAT I AM SO DEAL! |
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