Teen Poetry #4 |
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How strong is our friendship? |
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angel_2401 Member
since 2001-06-12
Posts 131Cincinnati, OH ![]() |
You were there for me when he left You told me you would never go with him Now I see something hiding You tell me you like him But because of that promise You will never let him know I cry, because you care for him You cry because you care for me You are a much better friend than I was To someone long ago I love you for that And now we will see How strong our friendship really is I'm sorry you guys, this isn't my best, but this is my emotions right now. Stace, I know I hurt you so long ago, and I hope you have forgiven me for it. I love you sis! And hopefully this other friendship I have will remain as strong as ours did... Kristin I don't have an attitude problem You have a perception problem. |
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xShUgArHiGhx![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
This is a tough situation and a very hurtful one..i hope things work out the best and all of you come out of this without being hurt...good poem |
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Fading Away![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-03-14
Posts 3131Lynchburg, Virginia |
This is very good. It seems like a very hard situation, and one in which I wish you the best of luck. The end note was a very sweet thing to say... I'm sure she appreciated that. Nicely done, here. --Marie "Well the sun is slowly sinking down, but the moon is slowly rising... so this old world must still be spinning 'round. And I still love you." -James |
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Raven Skye Member
since 2001-03-03
Posts 112.In a House. |
I thought this was really good, right to the point... good job... *×´¨`·.×*Raven Skye*×´¨`·.×* |
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
I liked this one.....hope things can be resolved soon. ![]() I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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anonymous albert ?![]()
since 2001-03-23
Posts 2979 |
very tough situation...i liekd the poem but i hope more everythings turns out alright ![]() ![]() [This message has been edited by anonymous albert ? (edited 06-22-2001).] |
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stace_co2003 Member
since 2001-03-30
Posts 497In a dream world |
awwwww, girlie!! *hugs* it'll all be alright soon. I promise!! *knocks on wood* the poem was great too Krissy!! I wuvs you sissy!! ![]() ![]() I don't have an attitude problem You have a perception problem. |
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Linc![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-03-07
Posts 552The Backstreet Boy |
Hey, I hope everything get better for you soon. The poem is wonderful I like it. Until your next poem -- Linc "Blood Moon" |
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
I thought this poem was beautifully expressed. I know it's hard to have friends in the middle of situations, but true friends stay together, and that's what is important. Beautiful read Kris, thanks for sharing. hi Sweets, Kris, Lizzy, Ina, Erin, Erica, Minna, Kit, Kamie, Javi, Jenn, Sharon, Nan, Cawlee, Cherish, Ashley, Sara, Justine, Leah, Jess, Kimmie, Mare |
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Marshalzu![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-02-15
Posts 2681Lurking |
Great work Kris I really enjoyed the read. Zu |
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Cinch01 Junior Member
since 2001-06-19
Posts 14RS, BR |
Hey! Don't worry, it will be alright, one way or the other. SO ![]() Cinthya (If you haven't realised yet it's ME!)lol |
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angel_2401 Member
since 2001-06-12
Posts 131Cincinnati, OH |
Oh my gosh, Cinthya!!! Hey!!! I see Stace asked you to come in here too!!! hee hee... Well, You guys, thanks for all the compliments... ![]() I don't have an attitude problem You have a perception problem. |
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