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TrueLUV
Member

since 2000-07-19

Posts 158
Connecticut, U.S.A.

0 posted 2001-06-17 12:43 PM

I've seen many things
I've been through alot of drama
Those are the things i won't forget
But I don't dwell on them
If I did it would be a waste
I remember the good times
Childhood innocence I recall
Memories of first love
To my first encounter with alcohol
But it turned out all good
I am growing, more mature now
I understand it so clearly
Moving on to a better future with only alittle hesitating
Knowing what I got to do
Counting 100's instead of pennies now
No more food stamp waiting
Found a love for success
And a love for the world
Even found love with a younger girl
You can even say we're inseparable forever
All that's left now is to plant my treasure
One that I could watch grow
One that will call me daddy when she enters this world
One who I would watch over
Protect her till the end
Beacuse a father's love is always
Till the End

Linc

Senior Member

since 2001-03-07

Posts 552
The Backstreet Boy

1 posted 2001-06-17 02:46 PM

Hey,

Aww this is such a good poem I loved it

keep up the great work. Until your next poem

-- Linc

"Once you reach your original goal it seems that the journey was your real accomplishment."

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

2 posted 2001-06-17 09:21 PM

What a perfect poem for Father's day!
I really enjoyed this one. very true too.....good job!

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

Fading Away

Member Elite

since 2001-03-14

Posts 3131
Lynchburg, Virginia

3 posted 2001-06-19 12:13 PM

Awesome work. I enjoyed this a LOT. The ending was excellent... my favorite part. Nice job.

--Marie

"Imagine a pageant...
In my head the flesh seems thicker,
Sandpaper tears corrode the filth,
And I need you now somehow." --Silverchair

Acies

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Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-07

Posts 7665
Twilight Zone

4 posted 2001-06-24 02:01 AM

I know I'm a little late, but I still admire the content of this poem. keep it up. thanks for the read

hi Sweets, Kris, Lizzy, Ina, Erin, Erica, Minna, Kit, Kamie, Javi, Jenn, Sharon, Nan, Cawlee, Cherish, Ashley, Sara, Justine, Leah, Jess, Kimmie, Mare

anonymous albert ?

Member Elite

since 2001-03-23

Posts 2979

5 posted 2001-06-24 03:10 AM

i really liked how it was written...great poem...enjoyed a LOT by me...bye

im addicted to passions in poetry!...are you?

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