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stace_co2003
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since 2001-03-30

Posts 497
In a dream world

0 posted 2001-06-19 09:54 PM

soft gentle eyes,
a loving smile,
floating thru the skies
I’ll be up for awhile

sitting on love’s soft cloud,
feeling your gentle kiss,
my heart cries out loud,
this moment I will miss

laying in the grass
staring at the stars
forever could pass,
but I’ll be in your arms

staring at the moon
reflecting in your eyes
this will be over soon
and I will question why

this love will last forever
this moment a second or two
it can be repeated whenever
and have many instead of few.

I hope to see you soon
you are my heart’s desire
until then I’ll stare at the moon
and be warm by loves fire.

This is dedicated to Andrew, who is and will always be special to me.

I don't have an attitude problem You have a perception problem.

Heaven won't have me and Hell's afraid I'll take over.

Fading Away

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since 2001-03-14

Posts 3131
Lynchburg, Virginia

1 posted 2001-06-19 10:00 PM

Wow, Stace. This poem was very good. You're very lucky to have him in your life. Cherish the bond that you two have... you never know what might happen. And always realie how lucky you two are. I enjoyed the poem.

--Marie

"Imagine a pageant...
In my head the flesh seems thicker,
Sandpaper tears corrode the filth,
And I need you now somehow." --Silverchair

Cinch01
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since 2001-06-19

Posts 14
RS, BR

2 posted 2001-06-19 10:27 PM

Hey grilie! Just tought to drop by and tell you (once again) that this poem is great! And like I said before: enjoy this feelong because is the best thing in the whole world! I LOVE YOU SISTA!

cherish
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since 2001-03-25

Posts 1639
swimming in fairy floss...........

3 posted 2001-06-19 10:47 PM

STTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTAAAAAAAAAAAAAACCCCCCCCCCCCCCEEEEEE!!!!
wow...this is sooo sweet!!!.

..im sure andrew is going to LOVE this.

..you guys are great! *sigh*..great poem..i loved it...sweet sweeet sweeeeeeeet!!..

...

"Life is not long and boring,
it's short and compelling." -Javier Agosto-

anonymous albert ?

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since 2001-03-23

Posts 2979

4 posted 2001-06-20 12:37 PM

someones been having waaay too much sugar..

...but stace!...this was a graet tribute to friend Zu...i so liked the way you expressed yourself in this one...great job!...enjoyed greatly

...bye

im addicted to passions in poetry!...are you?

fearing-laughter
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since 2001-04-24

Posts 605
land of cheese (Wisconsin)

5 posted 2001-06-20 01:37 AM

aww how sweet :-) i'm sure whoever you wrote this for will luv it, keep postin! later
-fear-

"I know the pieces fit cause i watched them fall away"--TooL

5_sweet_kisses
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since 2001-04-20

Posts 49

6 posted 2001-06-20 02:09 AM

Aww that was good. *sniff* keep up the good work. and Andrew must be a lucky groovy chicken

Peeker

Marshalzu

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since 2001-02-15

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Lurking

7 posted 2001-06-20 08:46 AM

Wow Stace, I really enjoyed the read, I totally feel the same way and I love you loads

. I hope to see more of your work soon so keep on writing

Andrew

[This message has been edited by Marshalzu (edited 06-20-2001).]

Linc

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since 2001-03-07

Posts 552
The Backstreet Boy

8 posted 2001-06-20 09:06 AM

Hey,

I must agree this is superb, its going into my library. Awww I love, love poems. Well most of them, welll this one! Haha great job. Until your next masterpiece

-- Linc

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LoneWolf
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since 2001-03-10

Posts 384
IL

9 posted 2001-06-20 07:17 PM

great job. i loved this

Lakewalker
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since 2000-08-05

Posts 3289
On the streets w/ people

10 posted 2001-06-20 09:32 PM

I liked the flow and the feeling of it was excellent, he's one lucky guy

"Be kind for everyone you meet is fighting a harder battle" Plato.

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

11 posted 2001-06-21 03:50 AM

OMG you two are serious?
Woah....talk about love connection

Well done here Stace....very sweet.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

punkrockerrobin

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since 2001-05-15

Posts 1180
Sparks, NV

12 posted 2001-06-21 04:15 AM

omg girl! this was so cute! sounds like me and my baby!

I AM WHAT I AM SO DEAL!

apsara
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since 2000-11-09

Posts 70

13 posted 2001-06-21 10:45 AM

great expression. awesome post.
it's great to be in love, ain't it?

apsara

fractal007
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since 2000-06-01

Posts 1958

14 posted 2001-06-22 02:53 AM

Stace:

Sorry for taking so long to reply to this one.

This was well done indeed. I am glad that you have found someone to love in this manner. The style of the poem is great. It's got some good rhythm.

I think you have potential to be a much better poet than I am. Keep up the good work!

"If history is to change, let it change. If the world is to be destroyed, so be it. If my fate is to die, I must simply laugh"

-- Magus

angel_2401
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since 2001-06-12

Posts 131
Cincinnati, OH

15 posted 2001-06-22 03:08 PM

Stace, I love this one. And Zu, you better be good to her, she's my sis, and I'll hurt you! Nah, just playing around, just, you guys, enjoy it!

And I really like this one! And you said you couldn't write.....

I don't have an attitude problem You have a perception problem.

I'm a nobody, nobody is perfect, therefore I'm perfect.

stace_co2003
Member

since 2001-03-30

Posts 497
In a dream world

16 posted 2001-06-24 08:32 PM

thank you guys for all of the replies!! I really appreciate it.

I don't have an attitude problem You have a perception problem.

Heaven won't have me and Hell's afraid I'll take over.

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