Teen Poetry #4 |
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Thankyou Dear Friend |
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Shygirl82 Member
since 2001-02-19
Posts 245Ilinois |
I love you like a sister and I always have. So please dont think I wrote this poem to make you feel bad. Standing in your shadow, thats where I have been. Never "beautiful" just pretty "enough" unlike you I never quite seemed to have the right "stuff". Associated by your name Recognized by your face alone Is it any wonder that I'm having problems dealing with a life of my own? I always seemed to fall in love with boys who wanted to date you; but I put on my smile and whipped out a joke. Its how I got through. I was so quiet those boys never knew that when I finally opened myself up I was actually alot like you. Carefree, loving, fun and sweet you were a package deal that was hard to beat So I lived through you Instead of letting "me" come alive. But just the other night someone told me how beautiful and sweet that I had become Thanks to you I let the real me shine through mostly in thanks to you. How I made it through a new school and new job without you I really dont know. It was hard to stand up, find my self and go alone. I still need you of course and I always will, but I finally know that I can live on my own and no matter how much I want too, I cant make life stand still. So thankyou dear friend for helping to find "me". Without you who knows where I would be. So here I stand with a life of my own. Still fearing of what lies ahead and the things that are still unknown. But thanks to you I know together we can and will make it through. So thankyou dear friend and always remember I WILL ALWAYS LOVE YOU. |
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Fading Away![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-03-14
Posts 3131Lynchburg, Virginia |
Aww, this was very sweet. It's always important to remember to be yourself in any situation. Very nice message. I enjoyed this. Nice work. --Marie "Imagine a pageant... |
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anonymous albert ?![]()
since 2001-03-23
Posts 2979 |
sweet poem...i hope you gave this to the person you wrote it for...very nicely told ![]() ![]() im addicted to passions in poetry!...are you? |
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anonymous albert ?![]()
since 2001-03-23
Posts 2979 |
sweet poem...i hope you gave this to the person you wrote it for...very nicely told ![]() ![]() im addicted to passions in poetry!...are you? |
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Angelwings Member
since 1999-08-27
Posts 222IL, USA |
I love you too Nikki! No matter what. That's why I gave you the poem the other night. You are the one thing that I don't question at any point in my life. You have always been there for me no matter what. I understand about life without the other one. It hard for me too. I was kinda spoiled and thought there would be someone as cool and understanding as you. But of course there isn't. You are the best friend I've ever had. And before I cry anymore and end up flooding us out of our neighborhood lol I'll go. I love you Nikki don't ever forget that! Chelsea *that what does not kill us makes us stronger!* *Everyone can deal with pain in their own way, some things are just harder than others!* [This message has been edited by Angelwings (edited 06-20-2001).] |
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5_sweet_kisses Junior Member
since 2001-04-20
Posts 49 |
Awww that is a awesome poem. *sniff* I know how you feel. Keep up the good work, and coolioz poem ![]() Peeker ![]() [This message has been edited by 5_sweet_kisses (edited 06-20-2001).] |
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
This was the epitome of sweet. Very nicely done here Nikki! I really liked this one! Beautiful job! ![]() I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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punkrockerrobin![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-05-15
Posts 1180Sparks, NV |
this poem was good!me gives it a 10! robin I AM WHAT I AM SO DEAL! |
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the_rescue Member
since 2001-05-23
Posts 316Japan |
that was really sweet I like the idea and the poem was well good I liked it I'm not asking U 2 luv me I'm just letting out the truth no hold barred about what I feel nothing wrong with what I say |
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Linc![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-03-07
Posts 552The Backstreet Boy |
Hey, Aww I am glad you found "you" ![]() ![]() -- Linc "Blood Moon" |
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Ski*Chick Member
since 2001-01-13
Posts 141Fitchburg, Mass, Usa |
I like your poem it's really sweet. Bye ![]() ![]() |
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