Teen Poetry #4 |
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Are we still friends |
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Nicholas Junior Member
since 2001-06-08
Posts 20Washington , U.S |
I wrote this today right after I got home from school after being shut out by two of my best friends. Are We Still Friends I thought we were friends And I hope this never ends But why did you leave me behind You probably thought I would not mind To tell you the truth it hurt me Are We Still Friends Do I have to beg you to go Because when I ask you nicely you just say no I don't know what I did wrong I know I have my faults and I know I can be mean But I have feelings like a normal human being And I think if we work together We can still be friends -nicholas- Hi everybody this is really to my friends I just wanted them to know how I felt. |
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CwboyAtHeart Senior Member
since 2001-04-14
Posts 541Selah, WA, USA |
Aw, I'm sorry, Nick. Me and Mike just had this planned for a while, to get together at the end of the year... I'm sorry. Course we're still friends - Cody - |
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fractal007 Senior Member
since 2000-06-01
Posts 1958 |
Good job here. I think that you might like to work a little more on your rhyming. You do a good job conveying the situation, though. "If history is to change, let it change. If the world is to be destroyed, so be it. If my fate is to die, I must simply laugh" |
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anonymous albert ?![]()
since 2001-03-23
Posts 2979 |
graet job on the poem...i think you did well on telling this...and its hard soemtimes friends do that...dont worry it'll get better if you guys are really freinds ![]() ![]() im addicted to passions in poetry!...are you? |
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Great job here.....you really showed how you feel greatly. I'm sure your friends would have gotten the picture if you showed this to them. ![]() I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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xShUgArHiGhx![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
Ewww this was planned??? Thats not nice of your friends ![]() |
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obscurity of cloud Member
since 2001-05-11
Posts 294....:::::******:::::.... |
this is so sad!! ![]() ![]() ![]() "so when at times the mob is swayed to carry praise or blame too far, we may choose something like a star" --Frost |
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Linc![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-03-07
Posts 552The Backstreet Boy |
Hey, Aww well if they planned something without you then you just plan something without THEM ![]() -- Linc "Blood Moon" |
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punkrockerrobin![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-05-15
Posts 1180Sparks, NV |
awwwwwwwww *hugz* i be your friend! robin ![]() I AM WHAT I AM SO DEAL! |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
very heartfelt ![]() ![]() |
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the_rescue Member
since 2001-05-23
Posts 316Japan |
I can be your friend la la la oopss sorry the poem was good situation stinks but it will get better I'm not asking U 2 luv me I'm just letting out the truth no hold barred about what I feel nothing wrong with what I say |
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Nicholas Junior Member
since 2001-06-08
Posts 20Washington , U.S |
Hey thanks guys and girls for the replys everything worked out o.k and were still friends until later bye |
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