Teen Poetry #4 |
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nikki813 Junior Member
since 2000-04-29
Posts 15PA, USA |
Miscommunication, Crying, stress, frustration, Wanting understanding, You're just too demanding, Not getting respect I'm due, Causing my anger towards you, Too ignorant to see, How blind you are to me, I'm here, but not for long, The ending to the song, The song of childhood, Will soon be done for good. |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
I liked this one a lot. Makes sense too....yer growing up. You need to be treated like a respected adult as long as the respect is reciprocated back I enjoyed this one. I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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Angelwings Member
since 1999-08-27
Posts 222IL, USA |
I'm with Dopey on this one. It's a great poem! And it's hard for our parents to realize that we're growing up. They love us and that's all they can see, is that we don't need them as much now. It's hard for them just as it is for us. He will respect you after he accepts your growing up. Give it time! *that what does not kill us makes us stronger!* |
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Fading Away
since 2001-03-14
Posts 3131Lynchburg, Virginia |
Nice work, Nicole. This is a very powerful poem, and you really expressed yourself well. You should always be respected by everyone, and it doesn't matter if it's your mom, dad, or dog, you should always have the respect that you deserve. Nice work, I enjoyed this poem. --Marie "Imagine a pageant... |
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obscurity of cloud Member
since 2001-05-11
Posts 294....:::::******:::::.... |
Very well written. Your frusteration is very clearly expressed. Great job. "so when at times the mob is swayed to carry praise or blame too far, we may choose something like a star" --Frost |
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anonymous albert ?
since 2001-03-23
Posts 2979 |
you expressed this well...i truly related to this...hit home for me...hope you feel better about this soo difficult situation ...bye im addicted to passions in poetry!...are you? |
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stace_co2003 Member
since 2001-03-30
Posts 497In a dream world |
*hugs* i went thru something like this...it caused me hell...quite literally. now my parents are my best friends...tell them exactly how you feel. it might not work for them, but it worked for me. at least try hun. I don't have an attitude problem You have a perception problem. |
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