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Hallucination
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since 2001-03-18

Posts 419

0 posted 2001-06-07 07:20 AM

She don’t remember me
Tough I’m sitting behind her in French class.
she always smell so good
But she don’t think of me as anything but trash

She’s so popular, with her classy friends
Riding fancy cars, expensive diamond rings
Dating shallow guy, always home coming queen.

Every time she laughs
I try to catch the light from her eyes.
When she speak to me
It feels like my heart is going to die.

She’s so popular, with her classy friends
Riding fancy cars, expensive diamond rings
Dating shallow guy, always home coming queen.

She got the bluest eyes
Always wearing red lipstick
Where ever she walks the sun always shines

She’s so classy with her friends
Riding round in their fancy cars
Showing of their diamond rings
So beautiful home coming queen

She’s so popular, with her classy friends
Riding fancy cars, expensive diamond rings
Dating shallow guy, always home coming queen.

Spine Grinder
Senior Member

since 2000-10-28

Posts 1127
Standing In Silence...

1 posted 2001-06-07 08:34 AM

There's something i didnt get, do u hate her or wanna be like her? i just want that 2 be cleared up for me! anyway.....this was a good poem.keep writing.

fall hard, practice harder not to fall

keoni
Senior Member

since 2000-10-16

Posts 850
Up in the mountains in the NFC

2 posted 2001-06-07 10:34 AM

Very nice poem! I liked this one! I hate the popularity contests that you have to deal with. Everyone has to have their own little group,each labeled something different-preppy,jock,skater,blah blah blah. I hated that about high school.
Jon

"Your anger is a gift"-Rage Against The Machine
"Only God can judge me" Tupac Shakur

anonymousfemale
Member Elite

since 2000-02-02

Posts 2797
Limbo

3 posted 2001-06-08 01:30 PM

High school is a pain but these little groups make the world go around. Every school needs them.

Nice writing.

~AF~

Just because I hear voices doesn't mean I'm crazy...SHUT UP IN THERE!!!

anonymous albert ?

Member Elite

since 2001-03-23

Posts 2979

4 posted 2001-06-08 04:56 PM

hey!...like who cares if you likes the gurl...go and tell her!...ummm nevermind that wouldnt be a good idea...but thats sad that the pretty gurls be going out with the shallow guys

...but unlike me?...THATS not true

...but anyways...i hope you the ebst in this situation

...bye

i'm addicted to passions in poetry!...are you?

Dr. Jo-Bizz
Member

since 2001-06-06

Posts 97

5 posted 2001-06-09 01:03 AM

ugh... who wants girls like that... *makes a face*... sorry.. popularity is lame

dr. jo-bizz

But His word was in my heart
like a burning fire
Shut up in my bones;
I was weary of holding back,
And I could not.

HeAvEnS AnGeL
Member

since 2001-05-17

Posts 168
The Hot Girl From Canada

6 posted 2001-06-09 04:58 PM

No, no. He does not hate her, and he does not want to be like her, He likes her but thinks she is too good for him.. Correct me if I'm wrong? Hey hunny if she doesn't like you for the great guy that you are, she's not worth it anyway. Keep smiling

Whatever tomorrow brings I'll be there, with open arms, and open eyes ~Incubus~

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

7 posted 2001-06-10 01:11 AM

Well said here.....I really got into this poem. The social boundaries us teens build for ourselves are amazing. Funny though, I felt that in this poem you could break them......like there was STILL some sort of hope. Keep that head up.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

fozzyozzy
Member

since 2001-03-15

Posts 336
Lessburg Virginia

8 posted 2001-06-10 01:15 AM

Popularity has a hand in everything school-related. It gets really annoying after a while. Anyway, good poem. Keepem comin

"This is cactus land!!!"-T.S.Eliot

xShUgArHiGhx

Member Elite

since 2000-09-26

Posts 3150
tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs

9 posted 2001-06-15 07:15 AM

Oyy popularity...In my school popularity really isnt that important..u kinda just do ur own thing...I hate popularity tho and u showed very well just what it could do to people...good job

Acies

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Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-07

Posts 7665
Twilight Zone

10 posted 2001-06-20 10:21 AM

I like the read. I guess in this stage people do concern themselves with popularity instead of goodness of the heart. keep sharing

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stace_co2003
Member

since 2001-03-30

Posts 497
In a dream world

11 posted 2001-06-20 09:47 PM

I used to be in the popular crowd. it's not all it's cracked up to be. you have a lot of "friends" but most of them wont stick by you.
but, this is a great poem, and I love it. I would like to read more soon!!!!!!!!

I don't have an attitude problem You have a perception problem.

Heaven won't have me and Hell's afraid I'll take over.

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