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punkrockerrobin

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since 2001-05-15

Posts 1180
Sparks, NV

0 posted 2001-06-19 01:12 PM

ok everyone i'm back after suffering a long period of writers block. that's what the whole "taking a break thing was for" so here goes..........

i didn't ask you love me.
all i hear is,
let's be friends.

i should of asked sooner.
i should of gave in sooner.
i really care about you.
but the chances of anything,
are not very good.

now i'm with some.
i love him very much.
i also love you still.

what am i to do?
tell me please so i can get over you!
i can't take this pain and torture anymore!
all i think about is how it could of been.

i didn't ask you to love me.
now that i think of it i should of.
yeah right you would of just laughed at me!
but i still would of tryed.

for now we will be friends.
but i want you to know i love you.
and i always will.
just remember that!

ok this poem is sad yes i know but i had to let it out. and this for someone i really care about. you know who you are.
robin

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

1 posted 2001-06-19 01:42 PM

good job expressing your emotions here....

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

2 posted 2001-06-19 02:41 PM

Nice job here. I liked this one!

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

Fading Away

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since 2001-03-14

Posts 3131
Lynchburg, Virginia

3 posted 2001-06-19 05:14 PM

I liked this quite a bit. Nice work expressing yourself. Keep posting all your work.

--Marie

"Imagine a pageant...
In my head the flesh seems thicker,
Sandpaper tears corrode the filth,
And I need you now somehow." --Silverchair

Shygirl82
Member

since 2001-02-19

Posts 245
Ilinois

4 posted 2001-06-19 06:49 PM

I liked this one..yes it was sad but you did a good job expressing yourself. Hope things get better soon. Keep em coming!
~Nikki~

5_sweet_kisses
Junior Member

since 2001-04-20

Posts 49

5 posted 2001-06-20 01:35 AM

Aww Robin that was great hun. *huggles* You did a great job expressing yourself hun. Talk to you on yahoo,

Ciao'
Peek

[This message has been edited by 5_sweet_kisses (edited 06-20-2001).]

the_rescue
Member

since 2001-05-23

Posts 316
Japan

6 posted 2001-06-20 08:35 AM

hey robbin that was a pretty spiffy poem there, see I replied lol. don't worry about it though cause you know it will get better

I'm not asking U 2 luv me I'm just letting out the truth no hold barred about what I feel nothing wrong with what I say

Linc

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since 2001-03-07

Posts 552
The Backstreet Boy

7 posted 2001-06-20 09:08 AM

hey,

I enjoyed it, keep the good stuff coming! Until your next poem

-- Linc

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Raven Skye
Member

since 2001-03-03

Posts 112
.In a House.

8 posted 2001-06-20 09:55 AM

good job! Hey everyone gets a period of writer's block and I'm glad to see ya back. Motivation and Inspiration are the key. Woohoo! But this poem was great. I liked it alot.

*×´¨`·.×*Raven Skye*×´¨`·.×*
"Can't explain the way that I feel. You are the love I never found." -Cold

LoneWolf
Member

since 2001-03-10

Posts 384
IL

9 posted 2001-06-20 07:25 PM

Good job. i liked this

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I've learned that even when you th

punkrockerrobin

Senior Member

since 2001-05-15

Posts 1180
Sparks, NV

10 posted 2001-06-21 01:11 AM

hey jimmy this poem was for you! you dodo brain!

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