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KeLicious
New Member

since 2001-05-24

Posts 9
PA, USA

0 posted 2001-05-24 04:32 PM

It's been a long time for you,
but for me its just begun.
yor tired of the same old thing,
but for me the adventure is yet to come.

Boredom sets in for you quickly,
but i am still occupied with your smile.
You need and want to cling to others,
but you enough for me this while.

I seem childish to you,
because I smile most of the time I'm with you,
but what you dont know is that
I smile only when I'm with you.

I know I'll have to let go of you soon,
so you can move on
You don't cry, but I do
Knowing that your gone.

LCsftball16
Junior Member

since 2001-05-17

Posts 39

1 posted 2001-05-24 04:35 PM

hey kel! i really liked ur poem even though you had a couple spelling errors.. no big! u know i'm here for ya if you ever need someone to talk to!! luv ya!

anonymous albert ?

Member Elite

since 2001-03-23

Posts 2979

2 posted 2001-05-24 04:36 PM

emotional yet deep...this was great...i loved this poem...graet job and hope to see more...hope everythings alright...u wrote this very well

...also welcome to passions...keep writing

if i die before i wake , i pray the lord my soul will take-"when thugs cry"

[This message has been edited by anonymous albert ? (edited 05-24-2001).]

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

3 posted 2001-05-24 05:18 PM

This was very well done and such a sad situation. Sounds like you really felt for this guy. Welcome to Passions and I hope to see you around posting and replying a lot!

Check your e-mail for a special message!

Dopey_Dope/Moderator

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

HeAvEnS AnGeL
Member

since 2001-05-17

Posts 168
The Hot Girl From Canada

4 posted 2001-05-24 06:18 PM

i loved this poem!
welkum to passions
you will ove it here
i hope to see more of you

LoneWolf
Member

since 2001-03-10

Posts 384
IL

5 posted 2001-05-25 07:45 PM

wow, i can totally relate to this poem. great job. it going in my library now

It's too bad I'm not as wonderful a person as people say I am, because the world could use a few people like that.
I've learned that even when you th

Child of the Stars

Senior Member

since 2000-09-07

Posts 1658
Ann Arbor, MI

6 posted 2001-05-25 07:58 PM

Welkom to Passions! I really enjoyed this...can't wait for more.

~Carly

"Go outside and use your own eyes. You'll be surprised to see things you've never been taught..."
~Edouard Manet

Ski*Chick
Member

since 2001-01-13

Posts 141
Fitchburg, Mass, Usa

7 posted 2001-05-25 08:57 PM

I liked that one

Acies

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Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-07

Posts 7665
Twilight Zone

8 posted 2001-05-29 06:21 PM

WELCOME TO PASSIONS!!!

Sorry, I'm a little late in getting to your poem. But, I guess better late than never. Glad to see you've decided to join us here in passions for poetry. I hope you enjoy this place as much as we all do. happy posting and reading as well. Your first poem is very heart felt. Seems like you'll fit in just right

Hope to see more of your work. Thanks for sharing

I'm so sorry for doubting you Kit ... please forgive me!!!!

~sugarpie313~
Member

since 2000-09-14

Posts 375
Maine, USA

9 posted 2001-05-29 08:45 PM

this is very good. very relatable

to me anyway.... *L* great first post. can't wait for more... you got potential kid *wink* hehehe

Valerie

Why do you do what u do to me baby...you know if I could I'd do anything for you, please don't ignore me cause you know I adore you

Angel Bee
Member

since 2001-01-30

Posts 176
Virginia

10 posted 2001-05-29 08:54 PM

Welcome to passions, good poem, keep writing, -ab

*~"Sometimes I wish I was a little girl again--because bruised knees heal faster than broken hearts."~*

Alyssa

Member

since 2001-05-30

Posts 385
IM ENGAGED!!!!!

11 posted 2001-05-30 05:59 PM

I love it! Oh its good! Keep writing more!

°°° Ålyssa °°°

Fading Away

Member Elite

since 2001-03-14

Posts 3131
Lynchburg, Virginia

12 posted 2001-06-16 02:27 PM

Welcome to Passions in Poetry! Very well done here, Kel! I enjoyed the read. I can't wait to read more from you, so keep posting all your work.

--Marie

"You're the girl of my nightmares, erotic and skull-faced.
Anorexic Beauty, feather-weight perfection. Anorexic Beauty, underweight goddess." --Pulp

xShUgArHiGhx

Member Elite

since 2000-09-26

Posts 3150
tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs

13 posted 2001-06-20 11:42 PM

Welcome To Passions!!!

I coulda sworn i already welcomed you but i guess i didnt

Sorry!! My memory aint so great hehe. I really liked your first post, very sad but very well written. Keep on posting, i cant wait to see more from you!

obscurity of cloud
Member

since 2001-05-11

Posts 294
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14 posted 2001-06-21 01:03 AM

I like this a LOT. I really think you've done a great job of getting this into words. Be careful about the spelling; it is distracting, but overall, great work!

"so when at times the mob is swayed to carry praise or blame too far, we may choose something like a star" --Frost

FoxXena
Member

since 2001-06-13

Posts 141
where dragons play, children run free and foxes are never hunted

15 posted 2001-06-21 01:42 AM

This is good poem. I've had a little experience like that with my boyfriend as well, and he ended up dumping me, but I'm over him.

*+*Would you be known by everybody? Then you know nobody.~
-Publilus Syrus*+*

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