Teen Poetry #4 |
The River ( Fragile Love) |
Wood_Stock Member
since 2001-05-09
Posts 58The little yellow |
- The River - The lion roars his gutsy scream, The running river carries with it a forgoten dream. Through rocks it slowly grinds away, Fragment by fragment, molding the clay. And I scream the way the lion does, The grinding river exposes a fragile love. Calming the wild rivers flow, This love could melt the winter snow. Though, it couldn't melt the cold from you, And should you freeze then I shall too. Then once again, I'd hide myself away, Until another river, could grind these rocks to clay. This one is for Tegan, should she ever read it... - Wood_Stock - [This message has been edited by Wood_Stock (edited 06-20-2001).] |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
wow...very well done! I hope she reads it! |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Nice one here. I enjoyed this one a lot. Very well done. I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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Fading Away
since 2001-03-14
Posts 3131Lynchburg, Virginia |
Nicely done! The flow and rhyme scheme were excellent. Nice work. I enjoyed this. --Marie "Imagine a pageant... |
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stace_co2003 Member
since 2001-03-30
Posts 497In a dream world |
I really like this, this is really worth sharing!! I don't have an attitude problem You have a perception problem. |
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anonymous albert ?
since 2001-03-23
Posts 2979 |
great flow...and a very nicely written piece...i liked it ...bye im addicted to passions in poetry!...are you? |
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