Teen Poetry #4 |
For you |
the_rescue Member
since 2001-05-23
Posts 316Japan |
Don't know exactly when we met but it will never be a thing I regret We talk each and every day and honestly I wouldn't have it any other way even though you never call me on the phone you brighten up my day when I am feeling alone. A personality and your picture is all that I know but my appreciation for you, I really want to show you were there for me when I all I could do was cry you told me to press on even though I wanted to die We talk about the relationships that we go through try to help each other figure out what to do you hold me accountable to God I hope I do the same a smile fills my face when I hear or see your name So what if we never met like most people do I don't think I'd trade anything for my "time" with you you make me laugh and smile and most of all think you tell me so shut up when my ideas really stink you convict me and put me in my place fuss at me as if we were face to face So yeah I'll be here for you as long as I can certain things about you make me want to be a better man So this is for you I hope you enjoy because my formerly mundain days at work are now filled with joy Maybe it's the way you are facinated with thom or the way you thing the elms are the bomb either way I just know your special to me and I really hope that is something you can see The_Rescue Dedicated to a dear friend in the silence of the night I hear angels voices singing your name oh how beautiful is your name as they sing over and over. (SPOKEN) |
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Marshalzu
since 2001-02-15
Posts 2681Lurking |
I really enjoyed the read, good work on this one Zu |
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Dr. Jo-Bizz Member
since 2001-06-06
Posts 97 |
hey... wow... that's so cool. i know someone like that... been talking to him for 2 years and... wow. its just like that. dr. jo-bizz But His word was in my heart |
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chasing rain Senior Member
since 2001-05-15
Posts 737Canada |
I like, I like! Very sweet. ¤ ¢H@§ïÑg RåIñ ¤ I heard a funny quote once...*scratches head* It went like this... |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
so very sweet...... big smiles |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Sweet indeed! I liked this one a lot! I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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LoveBug
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Member Elite
since 2000-01-08
Posts 4697 |
This is a beautiful tribute to your friend. It's wonderful that you have someone like this in your life. I hope you show it to them! Thanks for sharing. "Men judge generally more by the eye than by the hand, for everyone can see and few can feel."-Machiavelli |
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anonymous albert ?
since 2001-03-23
Posts 2979 |
great poem...i liekd how youw rote this...i bet many can rewlate to this ...great tribute as well...bye im addicted to passions in poetry!...are you? |
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keoni Senior Member
since 2000-10-16
Posts 850Up in the mountains in the NFC |
This is nice.Great friends are hard to come by. I hope you show this person. They would appreciate it. Jon "Your anger is a gift"-Rage Against The Machine |
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stace_co2003 Member
since 2001-03-30
Posts 497In a dream world |
ya know this reminds me of a great guy named Zu. yeah... love the poem sweetie. keep writing!! I don't have an attitude problem You have a perception problem. |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
such sweet words. beautiful!!! keep sharing thanks for the read hi Sweets, Kris, Lizzy, Ina, Erin, Erica, Minna, Kit, Kamie, Javi, Jenn, Sharon, Nan, Cawlee, Cherish, Ashley, Sara, Justine, Leah, Jess, Kimmie, Mare |
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Fading Away
since 2001-03-14
Posts 3131Lynchburg, Virginia |
This is such a sweet poem! Nice work. I enjoyed this a lot. --Marie "Imagine a pageant... |
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