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0 posted 2001-06-17 04:07 PM


k everyone don't like bash me or anything cuz i wrote this. i'm not a person who dont believe in love. trust me i've fallen in love more times then i care to count. LOL but i thought i'd just write with a different perspective...  so don't yell at me please... LOL i'm a romantic-sap just like some of u are LOL no names mentioned *cough* darkangel & whitepony *cough*  hehe jk


Everyone thinks love is such a wonderful thing
Well I don't.
Yes it's nice to have a "special someone" in your life
But it's not a necessity.
Some girls think they always need a guy
To fill that void in their life.
Someone they can watch at football games
And have the title "quarterbacks girlfriend"
I think some girls are so stupid
If they had to make a choice
Between a healthy life, or having a guy
They'd chose the guy
Because to them the guys job
Is to take care of their girl.
No matter whether their sick or not.
I'd take being single and healthy any day.
I don't care if I ever find a guy
All you do is bust your butt
Trying to please them
By make-up or dress or whatever.
Then you turn around and listen to your friends
How they say they become neglected 'cuz of him.
They just end up ditching you  
When your guy is with his friends.
Everyone thinks love is such a wonderful thing.
It can be, but I guess I don't really.

Why do you do what u do to me baby...you know if I could I'd do anything for you, please don't ignore me cause you know I adore you

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1 posted 2001-06-17 04:43 PM


Oh the painful truth (hey, I'm annoyed at the guys in my town right now. I have a right to be bitter). J/K Not all guys are bad, but it's the ones who are bad that give the other ones the bad rep. Oh, stereotypes, when will they be gone?
Rhonda

"Who did that?" "Charlie and Blake." "Who's Charlie and Blake?" "Rhonda and Amy.""Great. There goes the school."

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2 posted 2001-06-17 08:28 PM


BBBOooooooooooo!!!!!
Everybody bash on her! Quick! Do it now! jk

I liked this...it's always fun to write in a dif. perspective because you just might learn a little something about yourself while doing it. Usually there's tid-bits of truth about yer personality within a poem in a dif. perspective.
I enjoyed this one!

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

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3 posted 2001-06-18 11:56 PM


I really like this.  It's so very true.  Some girls always have to have a boyfriend.  Sometimes single's the best way to be.  Learning... anyway, I enjoyed this poem.  Thanks for sharing.

--Marie

"Imagine a pageant...
In my head the flesh seems thicker,
Sandpaper tears corrode the filth,
And I need you now somehow." --Silverchair

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