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Julian L. Chester
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0 posted 2001-06-11 02:54 AM


I wonder what and how
a  girl feels about me.
I wonder if I can ever
be normal.
I wonder if I can ever
find my true love.
I wonder if I can pass
to the next level.
I wonder if I die what
would happen to my family.
I wonder a lot but I dont
know why or what can I do.
But I wonder a lot and
why do I wonder?

© Copyright 2001 Julian L. Chester - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2001-06-11 03:27 AM


Wondering about Wondering eh? Yes well we think because it's what makes us US.....I liked the thoughts in this poem.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

Ina
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2 posted 2001-06-11 09:44 AM


this was good stuff.
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3 posted 2001-06-11 09:46 AM


We all ask ourselves all these questions.  It's part of life i guess.  Good job.  keep sharing

hi Sweets, Lizzy, Ina, Erin, Erica, Minna, Kit, Kamie, Javi, Jenn, Sharon, Nan, Cawlee, Cherish, Ashley, Sara, Justine, Leah, Jess, Kimmie, Maree, Mic

Julian L. Chester
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4 posted 2001-06-15 08:37 PM


even though we all asks these questions many people feel that they are the only ones who feel this way. thats y i put out this poem so that so many people can open up and be able to move on the way that i do and not thinking that i am the only who has these feeling and when they do they would know what to do in response of this poem so for every body who reads this. keep writing and dont let ne body get in your way if this is what you like to do.
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5 posted 2001-06-18 11:59 PM


I thought it was an excellent idea for you to put out this poem...sometimes its nice to know that your not the only one feeling a certain way. Good job  
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