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Alyssa

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since 2001-05-30

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IM ENGAGED!!!!!

0 posted 2001-06-12 01:43 PM

Okay!!! i put this back up so you guys can read it, i love this one!!!!
The sunshine becomes blocked by the clouds,
but its still there,
like a soul hidden,
by a mask of flesh.

And still..

Love lays deep,
in the pit of this soul,
like rain,
deep in the earth.
stored for life to grow from.

And still..

Life shares many things,
like souls share feelings.
The clouds move away slowly,
releasing the suns rays,
like souls releasing their love, slowly,

And still..

Saving some deep within,
to cover,
someday,
once again.

Hope you PEOPLE like it!

"At nude weddings everybody can see the best man!" "I have a glass house with no windows" "save a horse, ride a cowboy!!!"

[This message has been edited by Alyssa (edited 06-12-2001).]

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

1 posted 2001-06-12 02:01 PM

yes, I like this very much!

Acies

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Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-07

Posts 7665
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2 posted 2001-06-12 04:04 PM

This probably is your best. Thanks for bringing it back up. keep sharing Alyssa.

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Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

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3 posted 2001-06-12 07:37 PM

I liked this one a lot. Well done!

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

LoveBug

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4 posted 2001-06-13 12:10 PM

"Love lays deep,
in the pit of this soul,
like rain,
deep in the earth.
stored for life to grow from."

Beautiful thoughts here, my friend. I really like this, I'm glad you brought it back! Thanks for sharing.

"Men judge generally more by the eye than by the hand, for everyone can see and few can feel."-Machiavelli

anonymous albert ?

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since 2001-03-23

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5 posted 2001-06-14 12:12 PM

i liked this one a lot...thanks for bring it back up to share it

...bye Alyssa

im addicted to passions in poetry!...are you?

Alyssa

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since 2001-05-30

Posts 385
IM ENGAGED!!!!!

6 posted 2001-06-14 08:15 PM

THANKS GUYS
±Ålyssa±

"At nude weddings everybody can see the best man!" "I have a glass house with no windows" "save a horse, ride a cowboy!!!"

Alyssa

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since 2001-05-30

Posts 385
IM ENGAGED!!!!!

7 posted 2001-06-15 10:38 AM

PLEASE REPLY!!!

"At nude weddings everybody can see the best man!" "I have a glass house with no windows" "save a horse, ride a cowboy!!!"

xShUgArHiGhx

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since 2000-09-26

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tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs

8 posted 2001-06-18 11:49 PM

I enjoyed this one..i thought it was very nice

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