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WHiTePoNY
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since 2001-06-17
Posts 13
South London. UK

0 posted 2001-06-17 12:59 PM


TO BE WITH YOU
AS I LOVE YOU
ANYTHING FOR YOU

HESITATING
PERSPIRATING
ANTICIPATING

KISS

PROMISE TO ME
STAY TRUE TO ME
BE THERE FOR ME

HESITATING
PERSPIRATING
ANTICIPATING

LOVE

HESITATION
PERSPIRATION
ANTICIPATION

WHY?

I WOULD FOR YOU...
TRUST ME PLEASE...
SWEETEST B.



© Copyright 2001 Daniel - All Rights Reserved
thedarkangel
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since 2001-05-12
Posts 74
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1 posted 2001-06-17 01:16 PM


i'm not gonna tell u how duff u r!
thankyou baby i love you so much!
this poem means the world 2 me and i'll stay true!
love you
darkangel
-x-

tattoos of memories and dead skin on trial for what it's worth it was worth all the while - Green Day

Ina
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since 2000-10-09
Posts 1236
Quebec, Canada
2 posted 2001-06-17 01:26 PM


This was awesome....Welcme to passions. like the deftones?
I think something is going on between darkangel and whitepony!!!lol

Regina

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3 posted 2001-06-17 02:27 PM


Aww!  Another couple here in Passions    Welcome, WhitePony.  I hope you like it here.  Great first post.

--Marie

"Imagine a pageant...
In my head the flesh seems thicker,
Sandpaper tears corrode the filth,
And I need you now somehow." --Silverchair

Linc
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4 posted 2001-06-17 02:52 PM


Hey,

    Awww I am going to cry :'( another passions love haha okay back to the poem. Welcome to Passions! This is a great start and your style is great, loved it. Check your email   until your next poem

         -- Linc

"Once you reach your original goal it seems that the journey was your real accomplishment."

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5 posted 2001-06-17 09:29 PM


This was nice. I liked this one!
Welcome to Passions!
I hope to see you around more often.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

Jenn Cirrincione
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6 posted 2001-06-17 10:14 PM


Hmmmm duff??? Is that bad or good?
This was very good tho... I liked it. Seems as if love is in the air!! YAY

Jenn

"If my heart had wings, I would fly to you and lie.. beside you as you dream, if my heart had wings." Faith Hill

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