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Nicholas
Junior Member

since 2001-06-08

Posts 20
Washington , U.S

0 posted 2001-06-16 01:25 AM

This is just a poem with my feeling written down you can tell me what you think of it okay thanks.

You and Me

As soon as I could accept it to be true
The notion that I have fallen for you
I worried if you would still be my friend
Or if soon it all would come to an end

I'm afraid to get close to you
I know you like people who dress and act cool
I see your friends are like that too
And they'll see through me and call me a fool

Even though that could not be
You would never joke or scoff at me
What I want is your friends to see
that there could be a relationship between
You and Me

-nicholas-

anonymous albert ?

Member Elite

since 2001-03-23

Posts 2979

1 posted 2001-06-16 02:22 AM

very true...some just seem to ignore people by which group of friends they hang out with etc...i see that...and this is something a lot of people should realize...thanks for sharing it

...bye

im addicted to passions in poetry!...are you?

Fading Away

Member Elite

since 2001-03-14

Posts 3131
Lynchburg, Virginia

2 posted 2001-06-16 03:46 PM

I know what you mean here. It's a shame that things get that way... I know how it feels to be even afraid to talk to someone just because of the way you dress compared to them, etc. Not cool... Just be yourself, and you'll be appreciated for that more than you would otherwise. Nice work, here. Thanks for sharing.

--Marie

"You're the girl of my nightmares, erotic and skull-faced.
Anorexic Beauty, feather-weight perfection. Anorexic Beauty, underweight goddess." --Pulp

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

3 posted 2001-06-17 02:45 AM

This was sweet Nicholas. Very well done here.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

Nicholas
Junior Member

since 2001-06-08

Posts 20
Washington , U.S

4 posted 2001-06-17 08:20 PM

Thanks for the replys and the advice guys.

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