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Fighting Back |
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Carly and Allan New Member
since 2001-04-28
Posts 5USA/Canada 
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FIRST of all, this poem sucks. And we're not being modest. This is what we tried to do. You see, we're ruined. We only write stuff to be good. Think about it though, what would happen if we tried to write a bad poem? Like we really tried to? Well we tried to. This poem is completely horrible, we still had to struggle to make sure of that. So bad poetry requires effort too. that's the moral of the story.  So the next time you read a poem that you don't like, remember they might have done their job writing something really poor! Like the following! Well here's our poem. Oh and just FYI, we're both laughing our asses off. This was a lot of fun to write. I'd say enjoy, but you won't! "Fighting Back"  "bibble babble bubble gum i chew on on the car ride home I live on earth, I know that's dumb but it's better than living inside a dome buggle boodle baddle grum slimy worms are much too fun licking them until they're clean drowning them, we're being mean run away, you fallen one hold your hands up high and scream we're the bad bad bubble bum we're the killer man machine run and hold your momma's hand wait for her in candy land faster, faster, trip and fall we're the killers, we're the all we're the ones you hate and fear fun for you but not for some run, run, run and hold your ear don't forget your bubble gum! wait until i grab your hair stick it in, the sugar gum clumps of peanuts, never fair beat the I Have Got You drum! this is not what people want chase me down and peanut me to the land that time forgot where the kids with gum ran free [This message has been edited by Carly and Allan (edited 06-16-2001).] |
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Marshalzu  
since 2001-02-15
Posts 2681Lurking |
Well it was an experience, and this was hard to right? well ok I've read much worse but I'd expect far better from you guys, great rubbish poem guys  Zu |
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Jenn Cirrincione
since 2000-07-02
Posts 2107Fl |
Mmmmmmk. Well guys you've done terrible. YAY for you. It actually seems like one of those hard rock songs...the ones that you can't even understand the words cause they yell too much...but obviously if this was the song, we didn't really need the words eh? LOL very cute...  Jenn "If my heart had wings, I would fly to you and lie.. beside you as you dream, if my heart had wings." Faith Hill |
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Isabel Galaxia Senior Member
since 2000-06-18
Posts 733 |
*laughs* Um... *tries not to laugh* What can I say?  Bel "And you're my obsession |
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anonymous albert ?
since 2001-03-23
Posts 2979 |
hehehe...very interetsing poem...i found this a very enjoyable read...your guys always come up with something new ...hope tos ee more...bye Carly and Alan  im addicted to passions in poetry!...are you? |
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Fading Away
since 2001-03-14
Posts 3131Lynchburg, Virginia |
Haha!! This is... umm... interesting, to say the least. Very creative... haha. You two crack me up. --Marie "You're the girl of my nightmares, |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
This sucked |
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anonymousfemale Member Elite
since 2000-02-02
Posts 2797Limbo |
LMFAO@Javi's reply!!! Different...and I'm not saying anything else. ~AF~ Just because I hear voices doesn't mean I'm crazy...SHUT UP IN THERE!!! |
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Ina Senior Member
since 2000-10-09
Posts 1236Quebec, Canada |
Allan, Carly...WHY!!!! my poor eyes..... lol |
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LoveBug
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since 2000-01-08
Posts 4697 |
Guys! You are both so talented, why take time trying to write sucky poetry? Some of us can do that without effort, so don't use your time trying to write bad stuff!  "Men judge generally more by the eye than by the hand, for everyone can see and few can feel."-Machiavelli |
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fearing-laughter Senior Member
since 2001-04-24
Posts 605land of cheese (Wisconsin) |
hey, i didn't think this was THAT BAD. lol reminds me of some of my poems when i first started writing. thanks for the amusement, and i agree with your first message that even writing a bad poem is hard. well later. -fear- |
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cherish Senior Member
since 2001-03-25
Posts 1639swimming in fairy floss........... |
erm.......................NICE!....  |
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