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Been Gone but I've got a new one for ya |
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DarkSilver Junior Member
since 2001-05-21
Posts 33Six O'clock High! |
Scream SCREAM! FEEL THE DARKNESS AS IT SURROUNDS YOU, EMBRACE THE HATRED IN YOUR SOUL, BECOME YOUR OWN DARKNESS, FILL YOUR VOID WITH ITS OWN EVIL, AND BECOME YOUR OWN DESTRUCTION! this is one of my darkest poems doesn't try to ryhme just tries to emphasize how hatred hurts the hater just as much as the hated. It doesn't matter who you are only who you serve. - Draken O'Larn, the Starwarrior Saga |
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anonymous albert ?
since 2001-03-23
Posts 2979 |
very intertesing poem...instead of saying to free it, it says to get into it/acknowlegde it...i liked the way you wrote this...which im alraeady in that darkness trying to get out of it and destruction has alraedy been done...bye  im addicted to passions in poetry!...are you? [This message has been edited by anonymous albert ? (edited 06-16-2001).] |
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Fading Away
since 2001-03-14
Posts 3131Lynchburg, Virginia |
I like this poem. It is very dark, but well written. I liked the post note, about "how hatred hurts the hater just as much as the hated." That's very VERY true. Thanks for saying that. I know that sometimes people hate others because of their own self esteem... but hate kills. Words CAN hurt. Thanks for sharing this poem. I enjoyed the read. --Marie "You're the girl of my nightmares, erotic and skull-faced. |
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Spice Senior Member
since 2001-04-13
Posts 1266Resting in my cardboard box. |
Wow Dark! I liked this. I loved the Caps too- It added to the whole effect. Great job here! [This message has been edited by Spice (edited 06-16-2001).] |
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DarkSilver Junior Member
since 2001-05-21
Posts 33Six O'clock High! |
i know you aren't susposed to cross post but I think maybe the people in Dark Passions should see it too. I Said I'm sorry but no one heard, Cause ACTIONS, Actions, actions speak louder than words! - Hello McFly - Relient K |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Well Dark lemme just say that this was great and I did like it.....but if you KNOW you're not supposed to cross post why on earth would you cross post? Isn't that defiance at its finest? I enjoyed the poem though....and I hope you do not cross post  It's only for the best.Anyhow, well done and hope to see more of you soon.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I'm in love with my shadow I admire it daily [This message has been edited by Dopey_Dope (edited 06-17-2001).] |
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chasing rain Senior Member
since 2001-05-15
Posts 737Canada |
HAHA! I saw this one already...but I still like it, for a darky.  Man, you give me chills...  uhh...FLAME!!!  just kidding...ps- like your sig. I heard a funny quote once...*scratches head* It went like this... |
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